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Nemesis the Enemy - Small Town Goddesses 4
🕑 Added 2018-11-30 21:00:03 +0000 UTC I had started writing this in May. It has undergone major overhauls. At first it was The Enemy Goddesses banter over JJ's story but I didn't like that. Then it was Valerie telling the story. Then it was Valerie, Janet, and Abbie fighting over who got to tell the story. None of those worked. Eventually, I amalgamated the story into JJ's narrative and our heroines' banter. I think it works fairly well and by this point we have all of the villains set up so I can move into a more rising action scenario than a series of introductions. There will be thirteen episodes (for a season 1 kind of thing).If you are not up to date or would like a refresher read the earlier installments here:
Janet the White, Episode 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QdNHSIwKr9pWQY6RszaklMP8acMAML-prD5a5nSt4aU/edit?usp=sharing
Abigail the Green, Episode 2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EpvJOUYR36HDFB-wx_P-yO4Pb7MNkfi1S6QuwrZ60d8/edit?usp=sharing
Valerie the Red, Episode 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RYJSn1fWWS_ScNr3A__JThBqfDJgcFaqdkHMBTc7vc4/edit?usp=sharing
I've acquired the help of a beta reader, but as I've only reached Nemesis's end point on the 27th and I move apartments on November 30th, you may not see his corrections unless you come back to look on Monday. Thank you for the support!
I hope to have Diana the Hunted finished by January 1st and Juno the Purple finished by February 1st. A buffer of a month will give me elbow room to make a corrections as I go and fit the story to the overall plot. And I'd like a bigger window than four days from the end of writing until the posting of a chapter.
Hope you all have a great rest of the year and holiday season!
