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Maiden Stars 3, Valerie The Red, 1 of 2
🕑 Added 2018-02-14 21:49:24 +0000 UTC I eat like shit when I overstep my deadlines. It's nothing but salads and misery for the next couple of days. Happy Valentine's Day!The first three stories of the Maiden Stars (I've argued the names up and down with two close friends and settle on MS over Small Town Goddesses) are about defining the world. Sort of a pilot episode of a TV series. Abby, Jan, and Valerie manipulated by Michael are the core of the idea. Our Logline is simple:
Michael can turn any woman into a superhero, all she need do is surrender her will to him.
By the end of this story, I'll have everyone introduced for a first season show. The heroes, the villains, and the Ass Bandit. If you haven't read episodes 1 and 2, read them here:
1: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1He3J6SWJkR7ek2R0nwCZl1vstmhD4PUaBX6z4K6RUXs
2: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1OeldE0lqdnJrt6vBniSj8p3HyA9irZ3y1XIvvfg0rnM
Maiden Stars is inspired by Saturday morning action cartoons and magical girl anime wrapped up in erotic Mind Control. This Monday we'll see the introduction of our first antagonist. All characters are 18 and older (currently the eldest, excluding parents, is 20) and I intend to commission an artist soon to draw up cover pages so I can sell them on Amazon and Smashwords.
Your support is very much appreciated!
Comments
Neal Johnstone
Choosing wrong's my go to move, ask any of my ex-girlfriends. I like Maiden Stars so I can start calling the orbs Minerva Star, Diana Star, or Red Star as needed. The word orb is more fun to say than look at.
HardhatDoozer
I didnt think I had an opinion on which name I liked better until you chose the wrong one 😂 Now I really like "Small Town Goddesses" better. Go figure.
