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January 2024 Patreon Poll Story #2 - Call of the Outback
🕑 Added 2024-01-18 20:32:50 +0000 UTC
Hey everyone! Still writing on the other stories as I post this so I won't say too much other than I hope you enjoy this one! Been awhile since we've had a real SFW story I think?
When on a trip to Australia, you find yourself suddenly outside of your tour vehicle with the buggy leaving you in the distance. You're unsure of how you were now being left behind and in such a delirium, but with the help of a pregnant kangaroo and her group passing by, you'll soon feel so much more welcomed as a beast of the outback than anything humanity could've brought you.
Word Count - 2270
Comments
Willona
You don't swing often like this but when you do, you hit every time. :D
Emmet
"Trait identification" is the ability to bond with and identify with fictional characters. You can be high or low in it. I view myself as having low TI. I find it much easier to watch fictional characters at a distance. Sometimes I watch myself at a distance, and little bits flake off. This one's a wombat, and that one's a ferret, etc. I don't know what they symbolize. I vaguely feel like they're dangerous, since they got away with some of me and some of something else. In any event, I usually find these kinds of 2nd person TF stories ineffective. Build a character and let me study them. Do not presume to step on my toes. But I knew... I KNEW that car was going to come back and *I would still be sitting in it*! Forgive me, but I refuse to believe that this was a symmetrical exchange and that sitting in the vehicle is a once-kangaroo. This is not that. Something stares back that is not an abyssal unknowable but one with itself. How can Zeus and Athena coexist? One must spring forth in rupture or rapture, and as her gravidness symbolizes, it need not be a zero-sum. The smiling face was not taking pictures, just taking me in. I owed it nothing; I got away and was free. The smiling face was me.
Willona
I will ask that if people are feeling brave enough! That maybe... if any choice chosen below the "I like this!" choice could possibly list out their reasoning for it, it'd help me in the long run! Lets me know why people might not consider it their thing, or what confusing aspects made it unenjoyable, or why someone might not have liked it? I don't bite! And I'll make sure others don't too! It's all to gain experience and get better at what I love doing. Sometimes it can eat me up inside wondering "what went wrong" even if it's just someone's subjective opinion on their tastes.
