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35: Happy Place

🕑 Added 2025-08-22 15:23:00 +0000 UTC

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Mizar Caph

Thanks for the comments as always, the chapter's been edited. Could you clarify what you mean by this is a remark? Cheers.

Napalm078

"She loved being popular,who wouldn’t?" *She loved being popular, who wouldn’t? "At the same time, Chloe admitted how the ring sparkled for a few seconds, before finally opening the door." *same time, Chloe admired how the ring I do think the sentence would work better as 'Chloe admired how the ring sparkled for a few seconds, then went and opened the door. ' "Her skin was this deep, dark blue, s and her hair was pale blond, almost glowing against the haze." Something is missing or you neglected to delete a letter and a space next to it. "Every single name had been scratched out with a hard." *with a hard line. Might be something else, but that sentence shouldn't end like that. 'Ooooh, yeah, I like that! I’ll be the most special specialist ever!' Many comments could be made at that. This is a remark. 'No way! You’re on money? That’s so cool!' It sure is.


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