Caves and Critters Chapter 11 Page 687 WIP
🕑 Added 2020-07-15 22:03:13 +0000 UTCOop, found the nip. :3
Also; thoughts on the tail instead of the brow for Kaeden's off-panel speech bubbles? I like it more than the forehead myself but all of your opinions matter too. <3
EDIT: Added the inked version!
EDIT EDIT: Just realized an ellipsis somehow became a /// in panel 4. Will fix that before I finish it lol
Comments
Reyn Goldfur
Yup! My primary Dialogue, Sound Effect and Fancy Writing fonts are all my own creations.
Konomichi
The dialog error makes me realize you must’ve created your own font to letter the comic with, huh?
Reyn Goldfur
What can I say, he got the booty. Makes for a good grabbable in that area. :3c
Reyn Goldfur
Some habits are hard to break - also, it's one thing to poke fun at his injury, another to refer to his religious training :P In this instance, Kaeden's just trying to use a 'pet name' sort of thing for him, not tease him per se. (Beyond the obvious sexual teasing anyway~)
Gildedtongue
I'm sure it's on his chest, but for the moment in my perverted mind, I'm imagining Kaeden fondling one of Jacob's vestigial belly teats.
Regonoreth
Huh, for deciding not to use nicknames earlier Kaeden certainly went right for that one.
ZR
Oh wow Jax went not-so-straight for Kaeden's rear eh?
Ed Haynes
Who wants to bet Kharma and/or Theran will return at the wrong time? :P
Ryuuie
I like the tail too! I think it's adorable.
Konomichi
I like the tail a lot actually
Tenyo
Things are getting more exciting, hehehe
Syhr
Tail I like as you can make it point like a traditional speech bubble :3