Post "西田" by "ddks2923"

siki

老师，感谢您一直以来创作的精彩作品。老师笔下的亞絲娜永远最棒！

ヴィーナス松坂

鬼鳴らす先生の作品一生追いますあなたの絵は世界一

K3

最後一幅圖，簡直是世界級的作圖。

Hai

希望趕快看到老師的後續劇情發展!!

Hai

喔喔!看起來西田偽裝成桐人了嗎!?

亞絲娜醬

常服亞絲娜！！(♡⌂♡)戴口罩感覺好瑟，不知道會不會有口罩下口交的畫面(*´I`*)

wrgrblldp

The final image sketch of Asuna you just posted is beautiful😍!!!

Keyes

Would love to see the 4 hours of sex in more detail. Also, what's the chances Asuna did something while he was passed out after slapping him. She put a blanket there, so maybe there will be another SP from Asunas perspective

Ekidastre

This one is absolutely insane 🧡🧡🧡

KetariTOT9

Hope we could get more pov like panels like the first 12 chapters of this one https://ddks2923.fanbox.cc/posts/7649612

Rainylt

仔细一看又更新了不少细节，太好了！就是这种细节是最色的，后续剧情倒是其次了😍这样看的话就是不知道西田在本话里踩到棒子摔晕是真的还是做梦了，目前那副梦醒的画里没有棒子看起来应该是梦境

Rainylt

其他的差不多都看明白了，感觉因为顺序不同会有几种解读。不过为什么亚丝娜最后要穿那么厚实呢，是因为上次被西田看光了害羞？后面西田拿到1里面的道具估计又会做类似的事吧，不过那个道具只能让人睡着没有意识感觉不太好玩。现在亚丝娜已经对西田有一些想法了，再有一些契机就好了

JePreto

Is this item the same as in the first story, or is it completely unrelated?

亞絲娜醬

耶，真的上色了，寵粉的老師賽高😍

Bastingajaja

I wouldn't mind paying a higher suscription if that meaned a faster release window. I think that this is one of the best hentai artists that I have seen

Bob

I need a way to give more than one like

Persius Persian

And please continue with this faster pace of release cant wait for another year just for 1 story

Persius Persian

I love where this is going hehe i hope u add leafa too

Gray

應該是銜接sp 劇情最後西田撞見從廁所出來的亞絲娜，把他打暈後的夢境

亞絲娜醬

是睡衣亞絲娜耶😍最愛的一套服裝了，請老師務必給她上色（土下座）

LaSaMeYa

什麼什麼?!?! 後面劇情我怎麼看不懂？是從亞絲娜在西田身上玩素股那邊銜接嗎？西田後面是登入SAO？我怎麼感覺老師這篇作品畫不完的感覺😆

Izagi22

I’m sure Azuna let him a message too meet him in SAO !!

AceZx9

ALO?! Is it time for Nishida to meet Leafa? 👀

0001Y

The toilet bowl scene is very good. It’s a shame there aren’t a few more in-between frames. The other scenes felt distant too. It's an interesting concept exploration.

asuna

不知道这篇会不会加文字

亞絲娜醬

原來是夢啊，但是看爽了🤤 看樣子貌似西田1的迷姦道具還在呢？好期待遊戲內的做😍既然是在遊戲內那麼盡情的中出也沒問題了

ジェラルド 2

hmm from the looks for it this event will take on ALO? i guess this about where nishida going to beg asuna to have sex but in ALO? if is please do unline asuna i beg

Bastingajaja

Noooooo It's another dream... this is so sad... Maybe he can watch her showering like a consolation prize

Hai

怕沒說清楚,是在房間的橋段,不是廁所XD

Hai

希望能看到他們做愛期間的大圖, 甚至接吻和口交的畫面, 可以再細節一些就好了！感謝老師

drsshenanigans

That ending felt like the perfect scene for how many times Nishida got blue-balled in the previous stories. But, where did his bandages go?

Note

This work is amazing, I'd love to see Asuna wear a bikini for Nishida in a future project 😁😁

Bastingajaja

OMG look at that quality... this drawings are incredible Let's hope this is not a dream and that Nishida finally claims his rightful place of being the one who gets Asuna pregnant

亞絲娜醬

我天，看來還是我太保守了，沒想到就這麼水靈靈的中出了，老師還是一如既往地讓人出其不意呀🤩既然這麼大膽不妨下次把孕肚中出也畫出來咋樣

Bastingajaja

I really love this, let's hope it's not a dream. But seeing that his hand magically healed I think this is a fantasy :(

LaSaMeYa

我覺得你分析的沒錯！醫院開始可能都是亞絲娜的性幻想！從亞絲娜廁所自慰才開始銜接到上一篇的後續！

Ekidastre

YES ! I reaaally wanted a full sex scene with Asuna wearing her braid

Mrr武士道

我也有考慮過從醫生那段開始都是亞絲娜在西田4廁所裡面自慰的幻想，直到西田進入廁所那邊才是正式的續篇，也不排除整個都是夢（應該不會再來夢結局了吧。。。但我們都是讀者，沒辦法預測老師的下一步，畢竟之前也有夢的結局🤣 還是繼續期待老師的更新最好，總體來說有更新就是讚 😏👌

RINRINZ

我覺得作者可能忘了，或者劇情設定是西田自己拆掉了石膏，因為他和亞絲娜做了四個小時的性愛後看起來並沒有那麼痛苦。所以我認為這並非《西田4》的續篇，因為他醒來後發現亞絲娜在自慰，這很可能是西田的另一個夢。但我疑惑的是，既然他已經和亞絲娜做過了，為什麼還要反覆夢到這件事？還有一點，他真的跟亞絲娜做過嗎？因為在《西田1-3》的故事裡，他們從未真正發生過性關係，只是在他的夢裡。唯一的例外是第四集，亞絲娜為他口交。

Mrr武士道

最新的更新西田在廁所發現亞絲娜自慰那一段，草稿圖來看，好像是西田4在廁所亞絲娜自慰到一半，西田就闖入的片段。 1）注意看手沒有包石膏（老師應該不可能突然忘記這個設定 2 ）亞絲娜的髮型跟西田4在廁所自慰的髮型類似 3）內衣也是西田4廁所自慰時類似以上都是我的猜測，還是繼續期待老師的更新

亞絲娜醬

當然也不排除有亞絲娜上頭了直接同意做的可能. 雖然我還是感覺雙方慢慢拉扯，等西田一步一步蠶食把亞絲娜全身上下碰個遍再把中出小穴當做勝利果實征服拿下比較好，但是還是尊重老師的勞動成果～期待接下來的劇情😍

亞絲娜醬

西田先生貌似沒帶套子進去，按照亞絲娜的人設這個時候應該不會允許西田中出吧？戴著做應該是底線了，可能會半推半就用菊花或者歐派幫西田解決？用菊花的話西田先生還可以順便拿下亞絲娜的菊花“處女”耶🤔

亞絲娜醬

要不說這次亞絲娜能讓西田吃到呢😏看來桐人一個人還是餵不飽亞絲娜呀

papapa

每天都有驚喜XD 馬上就要假日了老師要開衝了嗎

PSYMOON

没想到是欲求不满路线的，老师真是高深莫测…

LaSaMeYa

蛤?!?! 和西田做了這麼多次亞絲娜居然還欲求不滿偷偷自慰?! 老師你到底要幹嗎？我好期待啊!!!!

ジェラルド 2

i feel like nishida only having a dream when he and asuna had sex the new 2 page might be reality? nishida will saw asuna masturbating then he might offer his dick to asuna?

亞絲娜醬

好耶，有道具戰了(*´I`*)期待接下來的炮火連天

亞絲娜醬

話說西田會在家裡看色情雜誌，應該也會私藏一些情趣道具吧？漫漫長夜距離白天還好長時間，希望接下來的時刻西田先生可以用些道具“教訓”一下“不乖”的亞絲娜(✧∇✧)

亞絲娜醬

哇塞，工作忙沒時間上fanbox感覺自己錯過了好多，老師構思的劇情從不讓人失望😍

K3

一起洗澡，再乳交🤤

Hudiy

有继续让西田干到早上的计划吗

plifo

Keep on keepin on

Xcmoon

希望来次真的，之前都是西田做梦

LaSaMeYa

然後因為射進去的精液只有一點點所以不容易懷孕亞絲娜就讓西田一直中出到早上直到桐人來接亞絲娜回家！然後西田半死不活的去掉半條老命攤在床上已老師一貫的搞笑風格完美結束此篇神作！可喜可賀！

LaSaMeYa

3點多西田去上廁所撞見亞絲娜在沖澡就繼續打砲然後把她壓在浴室毛玻璃門從後面中出她！

papapa

這結尾斷在3點是還有後續嗎?好期待

落叶恋風

做的时候加上裤袜pls orz

Hudiy

老师的亚丝娜太赞了！

papapa

老師畫的亞絲娜跟愛蜜莉雅都在點上，太愛了

ManOfCulture2077

不枉我長期贊助👍🏼

月光族82698

老师能更吗

俺也一样

西田:战斗!爽!

mmm

@bastingajaj everything you said is not set in stone and a lot of it is your interpretation of what’s going on. Also you’re just assuming this story is a continuation of last story when there is no indication of it being a continuation. Also the point of criticism comes from the stories not really being concrete everyone has their own theories because author hasn’t made it clear where the stories are even going he makes everything really vague. But to be fair maybe that’s the way he wants it for all I know so I won’t judge.

Bastingajaja

I don't think the narrative is that bad as some people say. If you take the previous stories, Asuna is a very sexual woman in a sexualy unsatisfactory marriage. With a boyfriend proyecting his NTR fantasies upon her. We've seen how Asuna begun to have fantasies as well after some time. Also they are trying to have a baby and it isn't working (And in that chapter we saw that Asuna dried Kirito, so she has A LOT of stamina and sexual drive) Then we see the things that happened in the previous storie, she gets curious, she is exploring the NTR fetish Kirito made her develop. Of course a couple more of transitorial panels would improve the narrative (Maybe Asuna picking up the porn magazines of Nishida, or cleaning cum stains, or something to see she is getting horny like Nishida) But if you take the multiple chapters of Asuna from the autor this is nice. English isn't my first language sorry if I made mistakes :D

俺也一样

西田:战斗!爽!

RINRINZ

Or maybe they've changed locations? In the next scene, Asuna will be naked, right?

ジェラルド 2

so 4 hours of sex ah

wrgrblldp

I am absolutely loving the progress! This is incredibly erotic.

mmm

Even though the story is poopy gotta admit those poses are hot. 🫡

白鬼院出雲

爽！！

RINRINZ

I feel like the 18+ content is moving very fast. I hope it doesn't end in just a few more pages. 😥

Bastingajaja

I hope that if he cums inside of her for real this time we can see a sperm reaching the egg. It would connect with the previous comic where Asuna and Kirito are trying to get her pregnant. Nishida cums inside once and gets the job done xD

W.Z

伟大的作品正在诞生（这次大概不是梦结局了吧，有点梦结局PTSD了

Coffy_Black

I think I really liked your work, even though the story moved a bit fast. I really enjoyed it. Keep doing what you love.

mmm

Art is looking great but the story still feels too fast. I’m not sure how or why things are happening hopfully we get dialogue at the end so the story makes a bit more sense . Anways great art 😇.

devil

这次终于不是梦了

LaSaMeYa

真的騎上去了！新年許願成真了！！太感謝老師啦！！把時鐘畫出來代表會直接搞到早上嗎？我好興奮啊！！！！！不知道能不能看到滿地弄過的套子和全身沾滿精液的亞絲娜（有中出就更完美了！最近很迷戀把女生弄的全身髒的作品XD

亞絲娜醬

老師新年快樂，新的一年祝您繪畫越畫越有靈感😊

完熟マンゴー

新年快乐哈，老师，期待明年也能产出更优秀的作品

K3

老師新年快樂

wrgrblldp

Incredible!!! I want more please!

Ginger Soul

I like this revision!

mmm

Only one page got removed it was the one where he wakes up to asuna jerking him off. I think.

ジェラルド 2

new page is added but some page got removed

K3

有西田陪伴跨年🤤

Kong1

让我们一起为西田加油好不好！

亞絲娜醬

西田先生加油啊，一定要成功！😍

亞絲娜醬

👍🏻

mmm

Author make sure to write the story you want! don’t get influenced and do what you like follow your own vision!

LaSaMeYa

亞絲娜會騎上去嗎？會嗎？會吧？ 2026新年新希望就用來許願亞絲娜不是在夢中寢取偷情（要特別強調不是在夢裡XD

mmm

Looks interesting but the story seems a bit rushed not enough build up imo but we’ll see I guess.

mmm

Interesting 🤨

Bastingajaja

Can't wait for the followup :D

Gray

有可能，近期好一段時間沒出完整的了可能現實生活忙可能靈感不足

RINRINZ

You seem so dedicated. I really appreciate it. I can hardly wait for Nishida to have sex with her in the next few pages. Thank you for your effort 👏❤️

mmm

The art in this comic looks great looks like author is going all out love seeing the sketches come to life.

Bob

always love more of this

RINRINZ

我认为接下来的20-30页就会结束，因为他们还没有发生性关系，我希望看到一个不用安全套的性爱场景。

aversil

Personally I want to see the Klein arc revisted.

kkkcLLL

有正片吗，不会就结束了吧

ManOfCulture2077

太棒了

白鬼院出雲

期待后续

亞絲娜醬

其實如果沒有前一篇SP劇情的話我也挺認可你的想法，但是有SP做鋪墊我感覺現在的劇情還好吧，一方面是亞絲娜之前就有偷偷給西田擼過（亞絲娜可能對西田的巨物存在一些想法，所以這次才會主動幫忙）另外一方面就是這次主題是照顧，幫忙照顧生理需求也是照顧嘛😊 也可能老師是在為後面的劇情做鋪墊，得有個由頭後續才好突破底線。這次只是幫擼還戴上避孕套，證明亞絲娜還是有底線存在，思維還沒有被慾望掌控，但是開了這個口子就像打開了潘多拉魔盒，西田大叔接下來就可以試著各種拜託亞絲娜幫忙，進一步讓她被慾望影響思維，最後底線突破成功上壘～我感覺這樣慢慢拉扯曖昧的劇情還挺有感覺的，如果是一上來就成功反而有點遺憾😗

RINRINZ

I hope Nishida 4 will have more pages than the previous Nishida volumes. Right now there are about 10 pages+, and if we go by the previous Nishida volumes, there would be around 30 pages+. But I hope there will be even more pages because I love this project so much and I have high expectations.

Astrokik

👍👍👍

tzsnuhc

如果亞絲娜主動幫西田大叔打擼，好像不太符合她的人設感覺西田請求亞絲娜幫忙，她耳根軟跟一點欲望推動下幫忙更對味

brove2

黑丝亚丝娜太棒了!!!!

Kong1

是不是还少了一部分图呢

K3

神作確定

Persius Persian

Please focus on the story line of nishida asuna. Many of us subscribe because of this work of urs

Astrokik

I completely agree with you. But for example, his latest works in general haven’t really sparked much interest for me. When they’re just simple fantasies, the focus often gets lost and they end up going nowhere. I usually need at least a minimal pretext or some kind of conflict for it to feel like real NTR, otherwise, a lot of the time it’s just plain cheating. And I’m only saying all of this as an opinion and as a fan of his work. At the end of the day, he does whatever he wants, and that’s completely fine with me.

亞絲娜醬

也是難為西田大叔了，美人在側“硬”是睡不著0.0

RINRINZ

I feel like your drawing of Asuna has improved a lot.

KingOfCulinary

請在下一篇文章中介紹艾米莉亞！

Kong1

西田大叔把尿撒在亚丝娜身上那段真的好色色啊！太难顶了！

亞絲娜醬

劇情可以是“因为答应了给西田看欧派，但是私密處不能讓西田先生看，所以給歐派戴上了乳貼”🤭

亞絲娜醬

老師可以不可以畫一章亞絲娜戴著愛心乳貼的！！拜託了！！(♡w♡)

亞絲娜醬

最後亞絲娜因為後面淪陷導致墮落獻出前面，感覺很讚👍🏻

亞絲娜醬

背德感滿滿！！(✧∇✧)

mmm

Agreed

RINRINZ

At least, if he's going to dream, I hope he actually gets to have sex with her, like in Nishida 2, but with more impact. I mean, he does it over and over again, until he ejaculates inside her, and then he wakes up. I hope it's as good as Nishida 2.

mmm

New refined art :3

mmm

@Ginger Soul from what I see is he got a boner in the shower scene and he pretty much goes to sleep with a boner than he wakes up to asuna “mysteriously” leaving the room probably to masterbate which has been something she’s done in so many of the comics. And now the old man fell asleep with the boner and is now dreaming up the scene in the last couple pages where she’s jerking him and he’s probably gonna ask her to help him with more and she’s somewhat reluctantly agree. And the comic will probably end with him waking up or something. And the author will probably make another comic explaining what asuna was doing in the scene where she left the room or something. Just a guess but we shall see.

mmm

That why I’m saying that’s I don’t have hope on this author actually writing a deeper story all his stories are just junk food and honestly I think if that’s what he wants it’s ok I wouldn’t even mind if the stories kept being dreams if the fantasies were more realistic and not just porn scenarios. I actually like the idea of it being just different fantasies every new comic because it keeps it fresh and it makes it not lose its intensity like most NTR tend to lose once the FMC gets corrupted. Every new fantasy could essentially reset the “corruption” and it would help it retain the best part of what makes a NTR good. Every new fantasy could just be a brand new scene similar to what he’s doing right now but hopefully with better writing and longer and more meaningful dialogue.

tzsnuhc

禁断介護嗎!!太刺激了!!

Ginger Soul

I'm guessing she's grabbing him in his dream, then he's all bonered up when he wakes up and convinces her to help because his situation is somehow her fault. So there might be some reluctance!

Astrokik

Yeah, you’re right. But Nishida’s first work had quite a bit of context and atmosphere. After that, he’s tended to go more straight to the point, and that takes away a bit of the impact of what he does. One or two pages where Asuna resists a little at first would already work for me. It doesn’t need to be anything too elaborate. But a bit of personality in Asuna adds a lot.

mmm

Even though I agree that would be nice a lot of his stories are kinda not deep in story because a lot of the stuff that happened tends to be dreams or fantasies from the perspective of either asuna kirito or the old guy so unless he changes it up it will just be some straight to the point story.

Astrokik

I think a page where Asuna resists a bit and Nishida convinces her would add a lot of atmosphere. But I get the impression that Asuna grabs him in her sleep, right?

Kitsuk

真的等太久了，点赞，求问大大预计什么时候能配剧情文字出正式版

俺也一样

书接上回! 这回不是梦了吧🤔

NARUTO

想看因为前面的话就算出轨了，所以勉强用后面吧…这种剧情

K3

老師!!!! 期待。另外有機會乳交嗎🤤

nello

聖誕禮物？是聖誕禮物？

mmm

I dunno as much as irl stuff would be nice I also like the idea that all these sexual fantasies are always either asunas or kiritos it’s kinda funny or in this case nishidas fantasy.

RINRINZ

That would be great. I'd rather it be a reality than a dream.

mmm

Also this premise reminds me of a JAV porn movie lol.

mmm

I know but it’s stupid cause nowhere in the previous stories does he injure both his arms anyways maybe things will be more clear as he draws and writes more of the story. Tbf this could also be a separate story in the same universe that has nothing to do with the previous comics and it would make more sense.

RINRINZ

I think this story is a sequel. Previously, Nishida was just dreaming. Later, Nishida injured his arm, so Asuna had to take care of him.

wrgrblldp

Hell Yeah!!! I LOVE THIS!!!

Bastingajaja

The best Christmas present :D

mmm

Story feel a bit confusing so far but I know the author is probably thinking of stuff as he goes.

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So it appears this story is mostly separate from the stories before unless I’m mistaken.

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wow I really like it. I saw your post and even subscribed for the second time, specifically to see Asuna get ejaculated inside, and also to see her uterus.