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Lamia-Iris's Tongue-fleshlight milking♡（Ejaculation difference/Tongue-fleshlight/Energy drain）

🕑 Added 2025-09-15 11:30:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

Kota

Oh I will wait for as long as it takes. You can't rush perfection. As I saw said on a post somewhere recently (and excuse the 'new age' slang...but...) "Peak takes time." So you take your time and make it amazing.

狐色‐こんいろ

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear the quality has improved, and I believe switching translation tools has certainly helped. Thank you again for your feedback this time as well! Your pointers are a huge help, especially since I was struggling with that part. Since these will be used in a game, I'll be drawing a lot more illustrations of Iris, so please look forward to it!ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ”

SkywardAvian

Yay, I'm happy to see Iris again, she's my favorite character of yours! I loved this work. The edging was really hot. Also, the translation was really good this time, you're really making progress. In terms of grammatical errors, I only have one to point out. On page 7, "I'll squeeze your balls tightly with my tongue no premature cumming<3" is a run-on sentence. This could easily be fixed by adding a semicolon between 'tongue' and 'no' in my opinion. A period works too. The semicolon can be used to connect two independent clauses when they are closely connected. It provides a stronger pause than a comma, but a softer pause than a period.