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Blind Alley Sunday No. 10
🕑 Added 2023-06-24 16:42:49 +0000 UTCEdit: A few people pointed out it was hard to differentiate between who was talking. Hopefully this solution makes it clearer.
Comments
Adam
Yes. I was hoping people would pick it up contextually as they read and the conversation progresses. Definitely gonna figure out how to clean this one up a bit for the book though.
Jonathan Gies
Yeah, ngl—I was confused about who’s saying which lines in some of the panels. Like—I’m not clear who’s saying “Will you ever stop complaining?” It’s the bag-creature, right? Right…?
Adam
Realizing now how much of an issue having two characters crammed super close together may be hahahah
Oh gotcha, I see that in the third to last panel now
Adam
I maybe didn't make this clear enough but the bag is the one saying they don't miss but need their boy.
I’m curious if Penny needing Crane but not missing them means they feel a deeper connection to them and regret leaving, or if it means they realize they want their own independence and don’t just want to be someone’s dog.
