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Do not Disturb Comparison_Page 7
🕑 Added 2018-03-29 04:32:16 +0000 UTC I toke several liberties with this page as well.In the original page while the squiritng was shown, I believe it wasn't really 'felt'.
To correct of that, I first changed the pose on the first panel to one that propelry shows the fisting action, panel 2 and 3 which were already repetitive with previous pages, got merged and changed into an internal view of the fisting and finally, the squiritng itself on the final panel got visual showcasing with more energy, showcasing the movement of the hand and all the love juices squiritng around.
Hope you gusy feel the imp´rovement!
Like I said, there will be no ne wpage next week, BUT, the March patreon rewards will be sent to alla ctive patreons! ;)
