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SoL :: Page 396 WIP (Help me with Dialogue!)
🕑 Added 2023-12-12 05:04:31 +0000 UTCHEY ALL! Help me decide on some dialogue!
In the fic, it says Papyrus is "talking about everything he saw in the human city" but doesn't give specific dialogue. Any ideas on what I could put here? I'll need some random dialogue to place that would fade as Sans drifts off into a daydream about Frisk!
Papyrus carried the bag of groceries walking ahead, talking about everything he saw in the human city while Sans trudged behind him, not listening. There was a few things on his mind. His little lady naturally took center stage these days, but his other concern was coming in his line of vision.
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Melikas
that is ADORABLE... I'm running out of space, so I'll just add something about greasy food!!! I love it!!! Thank you!
Ardelia
Greasy food, possibly any cars(Theyre really rare in Fell City iirc) Or maybe people talking about 'moving picture shows'
Alegro 🍉
Oh you’re right, lmao😂!
Melikas
LMAO!! I might not put in something too detailed, but I really like the "Humans are so strange/are the rudest creatures" Line!!!! I'll add that in!!! Thank you so much!!!! xD <3
Melikas
SO TRUE!! "-And everything is so small! Far too small! We'll have to have amenities shipped from the city for our new place of residence!" Perfect!! Thank you!!
Melikas
YES! "Lacking in good manners..." I'll add that in!!! Perfect!!
catsunelli
I like that. He has seen the park and its state, but I think other places are dirty, too, plus maybe overrun. Maybe it's even worse elsewhere. Like the city center, the train station, a poor district, the red light district. I think he would be disgusted by the living conditions of the people and the state of the city. You could combine that with some rude manners of the people.
Alegro 🍉
Let me think… “YOU KNOW, SANS. THE HUMANS IN THE CITY ARE SO STRANGE. FIRST I THOGHT THE ARE THE RUDEST CREATURES I HAVE EVER MET, BUT THEN I MANAGED TO GET TO KNOW MYSELF BETTER. AND THIS IS THANKS TO THE HELP OF ONE WHO I THINK IS… AN ADMIRER... WAIT, ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” “… Uhm?…” It’s just a jet idea, but I hope it’s a good starting point.😅❤️
Melikas
LMAO!!! That's perfect!! xD I love it so much! I"ll add that in!!
Melikas
VERY TRUE! "rude little creatures..." Perfect! I'll add that!
Melikas
GREAT suggestion!!! I'm putting that in!!
dar
he would definitely talk about how small everything is? since monsters are bigger their amenities must be too, but since humans are smaller, well...
LT
About people keep looking at him: "You know, Sans, some humans can be downright rude. I was walking, minding my own business, and they shot me these glares. Maybe they were intimidated by my towering presence, or perhaps they're just lacking in good manners."
Emily Barber
He saw a dog, that wasn't nearly as battle capable as those on snowdin. Gotta brag whenever possible.
Dania Palestino
He might take bad about the human he meet at the apartment building about how rude they were
ohbarnacles
I feel like paps should mention how dirty and poorly kept the park is and how some buildings look run down??
