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[BIAW] Chapter 157 – Whirlpool of Death

🕑 Added 2022-12-13 03:21:22 +0000 UTC

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shifter1987

😂 first god of war then a house sized food processor 😂 maybe Al should just turn his anchor into an industrial meat grinder to complete the fish-o-matic 9000

Saileri

Yeah, I checked and it looks like I forgot I made this change a long time ago while editing the old chappies before publishing. The first iteration had a tail but I removed it back then after writing that part and somehow still used it a few chapters later :P Gotta have to edit those and add a notice next time.

Ralph

Awesome chapter! Very exciting battle! Can’t wait for next week.

vardic d

In Chapter 145, when he tests out his ability to transform into a partial water dweller, Cornelia makes the following comment: ***“I kind of hoped you would get a handsome tail just like Meru’s but… damn. This much is quite alright too,” Cornelia comments with a big smile.*** Seems to indicate that the transformation did not give him a tail, but I think every time he's used it since, including this chapter, he's grown a tail. I didn't see any place where it mentions the skill changing, or evolving in any way that might explain the discrepancy other than author typo, so I thought I'd mention it? See if I'm just not understanding something?

Winston Smith

Nice chapter. Can't wait to see him find some more girls to rescue. I'm sure they'll be very grateful...:)


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