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[TWS] Chapter 180 – The Rightful Owners [HIDDEN]

🕑 Added 2022-06-14 21:24:30 +0000 UTC

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MadRat

Thx for the chapter 👍👏👏

I was thinking the same thing when I read that part.... After all, she is part of Ast's party

Robert Thornton

Yes pls Salieri

Jon Torres

I was certain Ast was going to give Sylvia a room in his castle and he would wake up in the morning to find her in his bed with his other mates.

shifter1987

#ARA ARA GUFU

Saileri

What if it's a nice demon milf with big tatas?

shifter1987

Sigh....the mention of milking an antagonist is really not settling my stomach.....

Dennis Erwin

No no no... not yet. Antagonists are rare and precious commodities in this story, even poor ones. This is the first AYM in... 60 or 70 chapters? Got to milk him for a lot more than quick drowning.

Termac

Hopefully, John Tacoma will just fuck off into the sunset, but I doubt that. On the one hand, he didn't seem *homicidally* angry about being told he has no claim to the castle. On the other, based on what we know if him, there's no way he's just going to let it go, and there will be many people connected (socially) to Ast in Glimmervale that John could target in various ways. If Ast is smart, he'll have Umbra keep an eye on the guy. Not 24/7, but definitely checking on him a few times a day to see where he is and what he's doing. I doubt Ast will bother to do that, though.

Termac

In what way is this a cliffhanger?

Darth Mole

Hopefully the drowning of that annoying bastard.

Darth Mole

Ok Mr alchemist hehe. Though you do have a point.

Darth Mole

You…… you are EVIL! ;)

Robert Thornton

What with the law of chekhov's gun, I wonder what the heck that Confluence of rivers is going to be used for soon

Saileri

Law of equivalent exchange. You get 5.5k word chappy instead of 3k, I get a cliff. Simple. Balance in the universe.

Ralph

This chapter was much better than the last one! But you keep us on that cliff too many times lately! I hope no one falls over it.

Michael Shuble

Great chapter!

Saileri

Outline? What's that? You mean the story doesn't just write itself towards its ending which had been decided at the very start and everything else is a journey there? :v

Darth Mole

I think I asked this before but can we get a “peer into the future tier” where you give us, under the penalty of a horrific death if we reveal it, your outline for the story as a whole? I pay lots! ;)