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[TWS] Chapter 151 – Deeper Connections [HIDDEN]

🕑 Added 2022-03-05 23:38:18 +0000 UTC

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Dutch Palmer

You should write----Asterios nodded, as he pondered the recent event. “Yeah. I still considered some other options, but things were getting quite obvious, already. I guess I have started accepting and embracing it.”

Dutch Palmer

Minor grammar tweaks needed. Instead of---Asterios nodded, also pondering over the recent event. “Yeah. I still considered some other options but things are getting quite obvious already. I guess I started accepting and embracing it.”

Saileri

Hmmm. It was around the usual size. As usual, I wrote to the point where it felt right without stepping into what would make it a double-sized chapter. Sometimes it means a chappy ends up as 4k words, sometimes 3k. I try not to pay attention to that too much since it can affect the whole chapter. Perhaps it feels short since not that much happened besides exploration and a short revelation.

Jonathan

I agree it was really short, maybe a bit rushed so some things were skipped? Over all I really hope you get some rest and life gets less hectic for you.

Ooooooooo!!!! Talk about a setup for the next one! Great job as always Saileri!