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[TWS] Chapter 149 – A Familiar Opponent [HIDDEN]

🕑 Added 2022-02-25 13:16:10 +0000 UTC

Comments

Jonathan

At they said the chapter has to end somewhere and they are supposed to break the story up into sections. Besides is it a cliff hanger if the chapter is in a few days?

James A. Murphy

Story wise the outcome makes sense but its a missed opportunity what would adding depth to Umbra look like it would be cool if he were more than a collection of convenient powers. for that matter what would the main character want that he's no already doing everyone loves him and is supporting him following his dreams just what could the trap offer him better than he's doing himself

Ralph

I think you are right, he loves his cliffhangers!

You know? I kinda think Sai writes the cliffhanger first, and then writes the story before it. 🤔 It’s not like we need cliffhangers every chapter to keep us coming back for more! 😅