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Early Access: KRZ 2 - Chapters 22-28

🕑 Added 2024-11-26 14:21:01 +0000 UTC

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Wraithmarked Creative

Hi Joseph! Thanks for checking on the continuity--the Ebon referred to in that section is actually an unnamed guard's dragon, not Norrogaul.

Wraithmarked Creative

Thanks, Janet! As always, these early chapters are released without the final editing passes, so you can be sure this and other errors were caught!

Joseph

Thank you for the chapters! Just a quick editing point. Norrogaul is described here as being a Royal Ebon, but is described as a Royal Crimson the size of a Royal Ebon in Book 1 Chapter 47.

Janet Beane

I really like the story, but there was a sentence I couldn't understand: "You need to divert the power into your Ability as fast as it comes into or your crucible." It's the into or part. I can't make it fit any possible typo, so I wonder if the authors changed what they were going to write partway through the sentence. Chapter 28