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STORMWEAVER: Valera Dent final concept

🕑 Added 2024-09-09 13:00:09 +0000 UTC

Comments

Tommy DANGerous

This is sickkkkk

Philippe Bekkers

You’re right indeed. She actually has 8 externals. The current record as well.

Vorsayo

Gotta be honest. That looks like a robot and if I didn’t know the story I wouldn’t even think that there is a human in that armor. Feet are clearly prosthetic or a robots (human foot wouldn’t fit there) and the neck is too long and narrow for there to be a human inside of that armor. The biceps are nonexistent and way too thin at that part of the arm (especially for a warrior). Everything else looks awesome, and I hope I don’t come across as overly critical (I’m not trying to be) these are just things I noticed and will potentially not go over well when this character design goes live.

Josh

I feel like with all the sass sent brings, she has a bit more backside than is depicted here. But love the design overall

Connor

wait did i misremember dent having only 6 externals instead of 8?

Colby Golightly

I too have a foot fetish…. I mean issue with her feet.

Brendan McG

I agree with the feet at the very least they are too narrow/thin. I'd also say give her large vision ports and maybe deliniate the face a little bit more so it feels more like a helmet. I'm getting more of a full robot/doll vib just focusing on her face. My last critique would be shorten her hair. Someone as tactical as her would leave a rope as long as she was for an opponent to take advantage of. #ednamode #nocapes

ABTelford

Very nice! Except for the feet but you already noticed that so…great!

Saint McDaniels

Looking great, except for the smiley expression on the armor, looks creepy like horror-movie-doll creepy. Better something like a half mask to cover the mouth or no mouth at all

Michael Wall

To sum up 85% OK, the other 15 fall under very bad feet and only showing six of her eight externals. Yeah that about sums it up.

Shannon Bryce

Much better than the previous version. Looks much more like a human body, but especially from the side those feet are interesting. I'm very excited about the comic and maybe anime at some point.

Sugoi

I love the body honestly, I can see why you’d like a change for her feet but honestly the externals seem out of place? I’ve always imagined them to have a set size. Comparable to the black orbs Naruto had at the end of Shippuden. Putting that aside, this looks great and I really want to see this comic come to fruition!!

Gregory Moses

Don’t care for the feet, but glad her thighs are thinner. She looks more like I imagined her to look.

Iron Akela

Honestly, the whole lower leg doesn’t look to me like it would fit a human leg/foot. And doesn’t she have 8 externals not 6? It’s awesome art though!!

jacob shlagel

Make them bird feet not necessarily with talons but with the ability to grab on and hold, it would be so cool to see her as like an ambush fighter hanging upside down from scaffolding or a tree branch and just letting go and dive bombing people. Or even only doing a partial call and hiding up in a arena doing recon

Kory Leach

Yeah, the feet NEED work to look like the human foot would fit inside the armor.

Jacob Clemens

Had to go back and checks, she should have 8 externals.

Jacob Clemens

Wasn't she supposed to have 8 externals

Paul Sherrill

Doesn't look like she actually has feet fitting in those thin shoes. If she lost her feet to the archon's that makes sense, but I don't think that's happened.

Nick Haugen

First, this is an awesome concept. Artist should be proud. Maybe square the feet like a gunpla? Add a little toe spike or blade for kicks? Also, doesn't Dent have 8 externals?

Morson

Me likey XD But you're right the feet turned out too thin. It doesn't look like an actual foot would fit in there (which is kind of important cause this is armor not a robot XD) Beautiful artwork tho