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Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 14 v2 + [NEW] 15 + [NEW] THE STORY SO FAR [ROUGH]

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 19:11:18 +0000 UTC

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NerdGinger

The pinned post is not always the newest post, and sometimes the chapters get squeezed down.

Nikola Vadim

I'm confused I just re-read the "chapter" 16 release this is just 14 and 15 rewrite?

Candida Hudson

These books would make such an awesome anime

Aerial Assault

Can we get an updated art of just Rei's CAD

Ivo

I'm sure Von Bor will definitely be the head trainer, she is a former champ and probably the most senior of the trio by far. She fits the bill.

Josh Nastri

I think the third is going to be a woman. Went back and read when Rama was talking about the deal and he said the head trainer had “her own ideas”. I can’t think of anyone mentioned in the story so far who fits the bill, so I’m excited!

Andrey Gerasimenko

what time is the new chapter?

Tarin

I absolutely concur that Sidirov is incapable of loving anyone but himself. However, if he was going to fall in love it would be with Shido.

Nicole Hicks

No, I think it would be more fitting if Sidirov fel madly in love with her and she absolutely ignores him. But how a self-centered, vainglorious, narcissistic asshole he is, his type of personality is incapable of true love to anyone but himself.

Rusty Barnes

Tease is definitely the correct word. 15 pages leading up to that! Ugh. Glad now I forgot to read the chapter a few days. Less of a wait for the next chapter.

Cynthia L.Lara

Not a good one with her parents… they couldn’t go to her inter schools competition. My fear is from a Harpie of a mother is born a harpei of a daughter. She is thinking she ALONE is the one to inherit and now…. Does she share well?

Sam

I didn't get the impression that Hiroto told Jasper to tell Sarah. My impression was that she did it on her own initiative.

Sam

I have worried about that too. A lot depends on the relationships she has with her family.

Emma van Wijngaarden

So satisfying, even the ending of the chapter doesn't really feel like a cliffhanger, but just enough to tease at the next one. I only recently got on-board Patreon here but man am I glad I can follow the story until its official release. :)

Tiffany Miller

And to be introduced to all the trainers the cliff!!!

Tarin

Loved the new chapters! I'm really excited about Rei and Sarah's first meeting. I don't get the vibe that Sarah is bad news. I feel like Hiroto is her most stable parental like relationship and I just get the sense that she is also close to Jasper. If Jasper has been training with Hiroto for decades then I think it's possible she's known Sarah her whole life and they're close. I also would love is she kicks Sidirov's but.

Dragons'Sheppard1995

Could be just that the relevation form Hiroto derailed Rei so much that the fact he has a sister seems like the least shocking thing.

Ryan Anderton

I have read the updates and added on chapter and it leaves so much open. I truly think the gate crasher should make an appearance if not now then later on for sure. As well the Lasher and Calus in the same room would be awesome, just saying! The new progress in character 15 really hit the spot. Now we just need Viv to fully recover!

Nz

So good!! I keep on thinking of Sarah and why Hiroto chose to get Jasper to inform her she had a brother the way she did. They must have anticipated some positive result for Rei. Also I think he will pivot strongly toward his grandfather. He’s waited a long time and Hiroto is a good guy.

Robert Smart

I know the sister is going to be a (big?) part of the narrative but I still find it surprising that Rei mentioned her as the second thing from the meeting to Aria. Not that his parents are scumbag dilliantes or their names or that they faked his death. But that he has a sister. Felt, strange. I guess it was one of two major discoveries from the conversation though. One that Hirahoto wasnt his father and hence wasnt the scumbag he assumed he was. And then that he has a sister. Idk just feels weird.

Cynthia L.Lara

You are awesome and don't apologize for being on your time! You are NOT a slacker. On another note thank you for having Rei forewarned of a sister..... unlike most my feeling of her "I'm going to kill him" when Jasper told her about her little brother was not a warm fuzzy of her talking about her parent. We will see.... although he (Rei), is so shell-shocked he might not have tracked that other than he has a sister. ... Great job!

Ghostbane

We are eating GOOD. Bravo Bryce, bravo.

EmmieCurls

It would be entertaining if Shido becomes obviously sentient and able to communicate like Dent’s and has a humorous streak.

Dragons'Sheppard1995

Bryce you son of a gun... that was brilliant. The new Chapter 14 is great and the Docter getting to know more of the fool of his spawn makes his rage on it so much greater. And with 15... the spar with Imala was just pure fun. Rei having new moves doesn't automatically means wins all now. And the ending... PURE JOY

Linda Thompson

Awesome chapter 15 and great revise on chapter 14. Also realised, these aren’t really cliffhangers because they lead from one chapter into the next chapter. The storyline is continuous, not a stutter start.

pfft

Fire song thinks they are surprised right now? Can't wait for the trainers to see him temporal step

Nahar

I’ll take 10

Ridayah Ahnkhuatra

I feel like the next Kickstarter should have a bonus option of a shirt that says "Cliffhangers are mean".

Sam

And SB7 has bad memories for Rei because that's where he was ambushed.

Sam

Wainwright , who is not Gatebreaker/crasher because he is O'Rourke.

Andrew

I was half expecting the chapter to end on "“For day one, yes. I’ll be observing.” Then she grinned outright. “Like I’d miss that for the world.”" or just after even that but was very happy that it extended.

gratch42

Once the full book is assembled these will just be great next chapter hooks - unlike the 8 cliffhangers that ended book 2 and are just now getting resolved into the narrative. I think this chapter by chapter reading means we’re all cliff-junkies (without the literal vertical danger). What we truly need is Luke to read these chapters to us with added AM radio noise and opening/closing theme music each release.

gratch42

Heh - Lasher showing up in a week, “Hey Rei, remember how I gave you those lessons that helped you last semester?!? Us A-types have to stick and train together - speaking of which…”

Heather Herren

Great chapter!! I keep hoping there will a calus vs lasher fight.. is that wrong..:-D.

gratch42

Really liked the extensions to combo ch14 - especially Rei attending to the frozen Aria which led well into the start of 15. Fully here to “not hear” Rei shifting under mental command. “Shido I thought Brawler not Bawler - stop misting my eyes!”

Amanda Jones

I feel like a giddy school girl after reading that lmao 🤣

Craig Bentsen

Fantastic Chapter. Loved it! Also, cliffhangers are mean Bryce. Just saying.

Carolyne

O my that was lovely

Zach Herrod

LETS GOOO GREAT CHAPTER!

Nahar

Cliff hangers are mean Bryce

Zac

Mr O'Connor... Bryce... Please don't apologise for having chapters out late because of your time needing to be spent for things like business trips or other admin work. We know you're busy, and we're also aware that you're trying to churn out chapters as much as you can. I think I speak on behalf of all of us that we all appreciate your work, and thank you for sharing it with us all. Looking forward to the next one!

saynt

then theyd go to the wrong floor

Iron Akela

Good point. I missed Kalus on the last line is misspelt

Jamie McKean

Great chapter. 👏

Shreyam Kumar

LETS GOOOO. This chapter heralds so much. I love it!

Voror

I think Bryce should keep that but maybe have it be they just were so nervous they got it wrong

Devin Jaros

Ahhhhh that was fantastic!!!!

Jeff McClure

Brother, I haven’t even read the chapter, just your note. NEVER APOLOGIZE for releasing it late in the day. You’re awesome and we just like when you release it! THANK YOU! Starting my vacation off Right!

Gama

AWESOME NEW CHAPTER I LOVE WHERE THIS IS HEADINGGGGGGG Also side note you had Dent say Sb7 instead of 6 where it was the rest of the chapter. Nonetheless, loving this!

Iron Akela

That merged chapter is great! Just right! And 15… well if that don’t set the stage

Christopher Generazio

oh man.... great new chapter, and excellent cliffhanging the chapter end. I can't wait for the next chapter and see how this continues!

Lyssa

Looooove it!!! So excited to see how it goes!

Darren Dyke

Thank you boss man!

Linn G

Gonna read this before bed now so I’ll spend the night theorizing about the story instead of sleeping, as it should be🙂 Edit: oh man, that cliffhanger again! I’m sure their battle will be legendary.