Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 14 + 15 + THE STORY SO FAR [ROUGH]
🕑 Added 2024-05-13 15:35:46 +0000 UTCTwo ultra-short chapters meant to wrap up this initial early-book conflict! Now we head into the high-octane stuff.
Also I 100% lost the thread on Chapter 15. Had a really good idea and it just didn't come together in the way I wanted it to in the draft, so a fleshed-out version of that will be the next thing you guys get I think. Need to sit on it and come back to it to find where I was trying to go with it initially. Yay the wonders of writing with ADHD... š
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A FEW RULES & REMINDERS:
Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you! If you want to voice concerns or complaints about the chapter, you may now do so over on the Reddit discussion thread below! Notifications are turned off on those conversations, so they're a free-for-all now (within the rules of the subreddit, obviously)!
THE REDDIT THREAD
Comments
ABTelford
I gotta say I felt a great deal of satisfaction when I read that he was financially cutting off his hedonist son. Good for him!
Bjorn
I didn't cry, you did
Tim Kilgore
This is my absolute favorite book series. I read quite a few of them. I am just wondering how much of the other CAD will become sentient? :-)
Andrey Gerasimenko
Are we getting chapter 16 today?????
Kory Leach
They are āIrish twinsā two children born less than a year apart. Bryce put that out a long time back, but it hasnāt been touched on in quite (or quiet, ;) Lol) some time.
Ricky Peterson
Thatās what she saidā¦.. I apologize it had to be done. Thank you Michael Scott.
gratch42
The sister was in a 2nd year tournament in book2 so a user school year older.
Ghostbane
GRANPAPPY TAKING NAMES. I AM HERE FOR IT.
DeathAndTaxes
Definitely her father, not Rei. Itās kinda implied after Jasper shows that Keiji hid Rei from her.
Logan4103
I am definitely getting samurai katana vibes
Aubrey Listi
Same here, but I have a sneaking suspicion he's either an A-type manifesting as or is flat out a Saber. His personality screams Saber to me.
Robert Smart
Wow. Grandpa is angry! Rightly so.
Al Parks
I don't think Aria would allow that, I can see the jacket giving over though
Al Parks
Does it say how old Rei's sister is?
Xien
Kamiya is such a generous soul... Giving them roughly 5 years to get a plan in place... Hmm... I wonder if they'll reach out to Rei directly before this book ends... And I wonder if it'll be an assassination attempt or as a"we were so young and scared couple can you forgive us?" kind of thing. ā¤ļø this. Thanks B
Iaxys
15 is pretty coherent and straightforward, though maybe it could go before the Aria POV, especially if a Sarah POV is telegraphed for the next chapter like the endings of both the last chapter and Aria POV are suggesting. I really enjoy Kamiya POVs in general though.
Thomas Verjans
Hey there, Belgian guy with ADHD and autism here. Iām a ā95 kid, and Iāve been trying to help the younger generation learn the lessons I did in a way that doesnāt involve quite the amount of suffering I went through. Feel free to send me a PM or something, maybe I can help with something :)
chris kizziah
The grandfather should have come with a node upgrade for Rei as a gift. I want to know what type the grandfather is. Iād like to see him in action.
karl sperl
I fell in love with your Story over here in germany. It is good to read from more and More people that say do awesome things especially when doing creativ work with adhd . It makes me hopefull for my 15 year old Boy who also struggles sometimes in school with adhd. Best whishes and canāt wait for the next chapter!
Dawson greene
I want more, I want all of it
Linda Thompson
Awesome chapters, thanks š
Korey
I remember her saying she would kill him but I was unsure who she was talking about her father or her brotherš¬š¬š¬
michael pigott
Oh man "viv reunites with the squad lacking context and sees Rei's sister with the team" would be a social situation and a half
michael pigott
We're 80% sure that the last time we saw her shed started planning patricide when SHE got told/ figured out about Rei so.... probably fine
Jeff McClure
I was about to get on the road when this dropped⦠I was delayed from my road trip for a few minutes, sir!
Teri k
Those are two very powerful chapters as they are and will be an addictive page-turner for fans wanting more ā¦ā¦brilliant!
Lyn Shirley
Short but fun. I liked these chapters very much, especially the severance pay for Reidon and Sarahās parents.
David Mcniel
One chapter and then transition into Keijiās perspective of them finding out. The chapter 15 focusing on Keiji confronting his dad or something like that.
Iron Akela
Well damn! Those are powerful, and a good length. I can see why some are suggesting they should be one chapter, in fact personally Iād probably lean that way myself if pressed. I am surprised Rei didnāt take his jacket off and give it to Aria, and Iād be happy with princess carrying there (either way works!). But yeah, powerful. As for Kamiya⦠now we know where Rei gets it from. Iām gonna go out on a limb and say all the Kamiya Users have that same ice cold yet hot like the fury of a thousand suns rage! Im looking forward to meeting Sarah even more now! And Keiji and Samantha⦠holy crap! Theyāve been living off of 36 million a year?!? While Rei had to work his whole life and now is making 40k (it was never spelt out but we were told in book 2 the million offered was X times and I think I calculated it to 40 thou)⦠thatās⦠boy
Iron Akela
Personally Iām 99% sure Sarah will end up being a solid person and a credit to the Kamiya name. Iām also 99% certain thereāll be rough patches first, especially once Viv gets out of the hospital
Iron Akela
Or Chancery maybe? Or someone decent but a lower tier like Sense?
Riyon Hutton
Looks great! Rei is definitely going to need some time to help the news settle
Riyon Hutton
I understand why however people are asexual and aromatic. Itās a brand new world and I feel that itās not just about having an intimate partner. People who are ace date but itās not the first thing on their minds
Iron Akela
I hope so!!! I wanna see Rei princess carry Aria!
Todd Smith
It was purely a gut reaction: only Mom & Dad are being cut off. I may be a sap but I want to see Rei's sister as an ally, not an enemy. Hmmm. We're going to need to see a love interest for Catcher one of these days...
Scott
hmmm - i dont know. I could still see sis going either way. You feel its locked in now? Which way? why?
gratch42
Wait wait, mentally exhausted but physically capable Rei notices Ariaās feet getting blue and princess carries her back to East Center! When Bryce said he can move onto the good stuff he meant more princess carrying Iām sure of it!
Shan Sharif
idk ch 15 definitely feels tied together, maybe a bit better to put the 2 together but definitely feels to pull the string together from the prev chapters.
Heather Herren
Awesome chapters
Gregory Moses
They finally reap what they have sown. Better than what they deserve.
Kush Kumar
This should be just one chapter. But I very much enjoyed the last bit
Korey
I am praying his sister doesn't fall in her parents' footsteps and turn out to be a jerk
Jeremy Jensen
Really liked everything and worried at all about the chapter lengths! I'm dying to hear more about his sister and really hope to see her a bunch coming up!
Kaeros
I really hope there's some reconciliation between Rei and his grandfather. His parents deserve nothing but bad, but it really seems like they're the exception in the family, and Rei deserves the chance to get to know the good parts of the family they denied him.
Joanne Hans
Great Chapters!!!!!!.......Need a bigger fix though, lol
gratch42
Really liked 15. Not sure what else I wanted from 14. Maybe Aria to princess carry Rei back to the dorm. š well not that - but some callback that he realized he had wished she was there.
Dalton Coady M Eaton
Yes yes wait what it's over nooooooo can't wait for the fleshed out chapters but I'm looking forward to It
Christopher Generazio
oh man! Both of those chapters were awesome, shorter than I'm used to, but very powerful. And the end of Chapter 15... definitely strokes the vindictive asshole part of myself.
Linn G
That ending is so satisfying. Looking forward to the conversation between Hiroto, Keiji and Samantha.
Maria Klein
Ohhh man. I canāt wait to read it all fleshed out! Didnāt anyone ever tell you itās mean to tease? Seriously though Iām really looking forward to the fleshed out chapter/s
TerryTG
I have a feeling I know where Sarah applied a transfer to and also that catcher is gonna fall for her
Cal
I love chapter 15 at the moment. Great to see the counter to Rei's cold anger to his grandfathers white hot and decisive action.
YangThePolarBear
short? yes. Perfection? also yes.
Lyssa
Ah the ending is Perfect! This was perfect! I canāt wait for more!
Jake Creates
I know thereās probably more to Hiroto than weāve seen so far, but chapter 15 was cathartic for me.
Jason Bradford
Awesomeā¦. More please. I feel like Oliver Twist right now with my empty bowlā¦..
Wraithmarked Creative
just added! sorry about that!
Todd Smith
And now we know how the sister is aligned. :D
Wraithmarked Creative
Forgot to compile THE STORY SO FAR! It's added now! -Bryce
jacob shlagel
When will you do a story so far? At 20 I donāt remember if they were every 5 or 10
Sugoi
Sorry we ever doubted you!