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STORMWEAVER: Probably doing a full rewrite of Chapter 6, and I'm kinda excited about it.
🕑 Added 2024-01-22 16:37:29 +0000 UTCI am of the opinion that this recent rough Chapter 6 of Stormweaver is possibly the worst chapter I've ever written. which is okay. that's what draft and writing roughs is for, and I wasn't going to NOT show it to you cause I didn't like it.
in fact, I've had an idea for a heavy rework 6 that I think (at least right now) is going to be so much better, and I'm psyched for it, which is awesome cause I usually hate cutting out writing since I prefer to move forward. this rethink is going to cover some holes I'm seeing on rereads (many echoed in your comments on Reddit) and I think will make the impact of moving into combat a lot better.
I'm also kinda excited to show you guys how drastically writing can change over the course of a creative period, as I've done 2nd versions before, but never what is basically a full rework!
looking forward to your thoughts! I'm gonna TRY to get it out Friday, but it's my birthday tomorrow (so I'm not working) and Amanda, Arro, and I going to the Adirondacks for a vaca weekend with friends, so I'll probably we working little on Sat/Sun (yes, I do usually work through the weekend haha).
regardless, looking forward to seeing what you guys think of the rewrite when it drops! i'm genuienly excited to cut this chapter out and remold it hahaha
Comments
Nikola Vadim
There is zero requirement to air your personal grievances with an author on their own public forum.
Melchisedec Bailey
This Patreon is starting to look like the next one to cut ngl.
Jordan Clark
happy birthday! Relistening to the series I was thinking of all the times we see Kestral talking to Dent and then I had the thought that if Shido and the devices its effected are progressing faster and showing higher rank qualities like helms earlier in the ranks, does that mean the devices AI or consciousness will awaken earlier as well? And does the S rank growth effect the limit of how smart Shido will be?
