Patreon-exclusive postcard WIP 2, and Chapt 1v2 coming Thursday, with Chapter 2 coming this weekend!
🕑 Added 2023-11-14 12:31:12 +0000 UTCSaying it allowed to make myself accountable for it! I finally have a better direction then the kinda dumb you guys got with the first version of Chapter 1, so I want to start over with less data dumping/recap! I think it will be much much better!
Comments
ABTelford
Yea, Rei’s face looks feminine in this drawing - the long hair and cheekbones to jaw ratio are contributing factors. He also has a rather abnormally small mouth. I love it otherwise. PS - Rei’s hair could not have gotten that long yet. The normal hair growth rate is about an inch a month. So I’m guessing it would take 1.5-2 years for his hair to grow that long from the short cut he got at the start of the Galen’s school year. I LOVE the long hair look…but maybe add a comment somewhere about CAD growth affecting hair growth too? Or adjust the art.
Kirivina
Rei's face also looks feminine for some reason.
JayLynn
I don't know if its just me, but I feel like Rei should be shorter. It feels like if he stood up he would be the same height as Aria or maybe even taller.
Wes Brown
None if that looks like what I thought the books described. Isn't the shield supposed to be way bigger?
Ludvig Wärnsten
Just joined this patreon and I just have to say that I love your take on this. For us to have the opportunity to follow the process for a small sum, read chapters in advance and get some pics and stuff is awesome!