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EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 50 [ROUGH] + THE STORY SO FAR 1-50
🕑 Added 2023-04-07 12:30:17 +0000 UTCHey everyone. PLEASE READ.
Once again I ask that those of you who may be sensitive to the subject matter take the anecdote quoted at the top of the chapter seriously.
And again, in reference to that anecdote, I am making a rare request for feedback on its use/appropriateness. You are also free to comment and discuss how this chapter makes you feel about Logan and Viv, their relationship, and if you think I executed this correctly.
https://www.reddit.com/r/Warformed/comments/12ejpmg/stormweaver_ii_chapter_50_rough_patreon_post/
EDIT: "THE STORY SO FAR 1-50" added
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
- SUSPENDED FOR THIS CHAPTER ONLY: [On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you! If you want to voice concerns or complaints about the chapter, you may now do so over on the Reddit discussion thread! Notifications are turned off on those conversations, so they're a free-for-all now (within the rules of the subreddit, obviously)!]
That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
Michael Wuestenberg
Every single day, 22 veterans kill themselves--Every. Single. Day.
Kyler
Add to the suicide hotline blurb that there is now a short number like 911. It is 988
chris kizziah
Now the question is that once Logan becomes famous, does his grandfather try to reestablish their relationship and how would the team be there to help support him?
Gb
And so Logan Grant becomes a twisted future Batman but you know broke. Super heroes always have dead parents. Still well done though. Definitely a very different take that works. Don't let his mom be named Martha though.
Carolyne
Well-done
Clay Rasmussen
Holy shit, parenting in the future has really gone down hill. Fuck that's dark.
Hartmann
Well in Logan's case it probably would have been better not to have parents. I think other than Rei's genetic issue he had - for his circumstances - a relatively good and supportive childhood. At least that is the impression I have from him mentioning the Estoran (?) Center.
Wraithmarked Creative
lol
Decorus
It really is a competition between Rei, Logan and Aria for who has the worst parents. I think Logan wins, because he definitely has the worst Grandfather.
Rei: “Oh…So you had parents?”
independent Thoughts
Well, I was wrong on my prediction, for this story.
Jeffrey V.
Book 1 makes more sense
