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EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 40 [REWORK] + Chapter 41 SNEAK PEEK

🕑 Added 2023-01-02 18:08:22 +0000 UTC

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Samantha Sandlin

I've been wondering this, too. I thought Central was the head of the military so who would be over them? There is no central government, other than the MIND.

Ithoughtofsomething

Since when was this a thing? Or are u just hoping 😂

Xien

Sooooo.... Who's got oversight of central to be investigating the first rigged parameter test that landed ray in the hospital?

Carolyne

I love it. It makes sooooo much sense that Viv would be there and a voice he would respond to no mater what!

Honestly liked the original version better. It showed that Aria was willing to get angry for Rei and that even she had a line. I feel like replacing her with Viv cheapens the interaction in the moment and just falls back on the tried and tested.

saynt

arias brother

Heather Herren

Aria brother.. kalus

Wraithmarked Creative

Harem = Ew -Bryce

Scott

Rei, and Dent, and Lennon and ... who is the 4th?

Heather Herren

Just think.. 4 well recognized A types under the same roof… all connected in some way…..

DeanDer

Absolutely, harem would ruin this series.

I must admit that I like the original a lot more. Viv's been a character I've just really disliked--I can't tell why, but... I guess she just kind of gets on my nerves. I liked the "intimacy" of Aria and Rei in the scene (I ship them very hard :D). Anyway, please no harem ahhaha.

Alex

The iron bishop and the headmasters assistant aren't straight.

Voror

I actually liked the original version with Aria, though this is fine too. The sheer anger does fit Viv more I agree with the blowup, though after everything that's been done to Rei plus what Aria just had to witness firsthand I could see her being angry enough to fly off the handle like that. Excited to see what Aria's evolution ends up being. I'm not surprised after that last fight really.

Tiffany Miller

I liked it! I love Viv hate her with Grant. Like really hate it so much. But then not a fan of every relationship in a series being a straight one

DeanDer

Since I'm a "Viv" hater, my view is biased. Having Viv in the dialogue takes away some of the intimacy between Rei and Aria. Having Aria stand up for him in addition to her "bringing" Rei out of his nightmare added more depth to their relationship.

Kory Leach

I really liked the original version, BUT it works way better with Vic being the hothead letting her tongue run rampant as it’s exactly her character in a way that Aria hasn’t been.