EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 27, Part 1 [ROUGH]

Khite

I’m a sucker for this!!! Squeeee 🥰😍🥹

Marcus

Loved the scene. The whole thing, to me it seems to perfectly match their personalities.

Ghostbane

Based on the Logan Grant feedback a few weeks ago, this was definitely the conscientious, a peak behind the curtain if you will. Loving the direction of their honest intimacy and how comfortable they are with it. Very well handled! Moar.

Tiffany Miller

Different people different. Relationship. Each couple will move at different speeds

Trey Atkins

I think the scene shows more about each character and is well done, howveach character acts seems to be in character for them and has been alluded to in book 1. My only concern is that this seems to be a big change in tone from book 1 where Rei and Aria danced around each other the whole book before even agreeing to go on one date. I'm not sure if this matters, though.

Bryce, my guy. What kind of a walk did you take before you wrote this?! Excellent work sir. I like the story, the detail. Great flow between the passion/spiciness and tenderness between them. This type of relationship has a delicate balance of rough and soft (so I hear 😅) and you walked that line perfectly.

Joanne Hans

It's a great scene.

Kyle Wilsnagh

Also, I know SOME people may see Logan's behaviour as aggressive but it perfectly fits Viv's personality that she would like it/react that way. AND people need to remember she is not some weak girl who could get hurt from these actions, she is a User who could probably pick up most men and throw them 50metres into the air. Therefore not helpless to get out of the situation if she wanted to.

Kyle Wilsnagh

This is literally the first time I have ever understood what Viv sees in Logan. Think it adds so much to the story/thier relationship/both of their character development.

Lori

Love it!

Cynthia L.Lara

Awesome conversation! Seeing her insecurities is also great, she had always seemed to put together with only her hot temper being her fault. I also like that Grant is able to stand up to her since Rei never really has been able to do so. I wouldn't change a thing.

Devin Jaros

Yes yes…yes yes yes

Daniel Moth

I absolutely loved this scene. I have to admit, I struggled to accept Viv and Logan. It just kept feeling like a betrayal of Rei for her to have a secret relationsship with his tormenter. Regardless of his own issues. I felt like she should have been able to make him see Rei in a different light in MONTHS of them dating. Regardless of Rei accepting it some what I still had a very hard swallowing it, this changed that. So thank you.