STORMWEAVER 2: Let's Chat About - Logan Grant [MINOR SPOILER ALERT]

Travis

It would be great to have a chapter just on Grant to get to know him better, and maybe have a bit more visibility on private time between him and Viv. Grant’s past as a driving factor for his anger issues is a great opportunity to let readers dive into who Grant is. Right now his behavior change seems a bit shallow because it feels like Viv is forcing it. Realistically behavior change comes from someone wanting to change. Beyond Viv, why does Grant want to change?

John O'Connor

I’d still prefer to see him dead honestly. Viv deserves better.

Ayce-o-Spades

A bully is a bully no matter the reason. Viv deserves backlash along with Logan. If your ”best friend” starts dating your bully can that person truly be trusted. You don’t act shitty and then have everyone around you just shrug it off, it is completely unrealistic. Viv is an awful friend and Logan is still simply an a-hole. I voted 2 because the way this played out is completely off putting and unrealistic. Also why does Viv hide so much when she excepts everyone else to tell her everything? Her relationship with Rei is completely one sided. I know it’s unchangeable at this point but wow good job on ruining Viv along with Grant who was already a POS.

Mark Leavitt

I'm a little late here, but some of my favorite chapters are the ones told from Logan's perspective. I would love to have more of those.

Melchisedec Bailey

Yall need to get in more fist fights not screaming matches... I don't know there's something primal about beating the hell out of somebody that did you dirty. A finality to it. Like, "Okay, this is my point. I am right. And you need to accept it. Or imma beat the crap outta you." And as a man, you just gotta accept it. And there's a primal part of your brain that has to respect it, if you have any kind of honor. That's what happened between Logan and Rei. Y'all are too used to "talking out your feelings." Sometimes, you just gotta fight. Tell me, when's the last time you ever turned a bully, or an enemy into someone that respects you by "Talking to them." It never happens. You know what does make them respect you? A black eye, and busted lip. It's not really something everyone is comfortable with these days. But litterally for thousands of years of human history accross hundreds of cultures, this is a big part of how boys solved their problems with each other.

Gregory Moses

After chapter 22 it’s perfect!

Hoopsterben

Not giving criticism at all, but the fact that Viv was almost hiding it at first, and that Reidon (using his first name because it’s the best MC name I’ve ever ran into) had no objections to it is interesting in terms of character growth. People don’t hide things they think is right. And usually people get mad at their best friend for cozying up with their bully. Could be a growing point for both of them :)

Agree with those who’ve said there’s not been enough experience of Viv and Logan together. It would help to see more of maturing/trying Logan also.

Ghostbane

I think Logan's progression and internal monologue has been very good and have been hoping to see more things from his perspective since the short convo with Rei after their fight. There has been very little light shone on his and Viv's relationship so not to sure on what to comment on it. Obviously being the private people they are to such things, we'll never see much externally over time. But, even from Logan's monologue, or even potentially Viv's, it would be good to see more rationale. Regardless of whatever of us thinks, his and their story has been enjoyable to do date, keep it up!

As a character, he is growing and gaining more depth and relatability. But there has been no more progress or added depth into his relationship with Viv.