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EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 15 + 16
🕑 Added 2022-05-22 02:07:54 +0000 UTCSo, a couple of things:
First, on compiling what had been written as a single chapter, it was 42 pages long, and I realized I just could not let that stand. However, I made you guys wait, and I already make you hang around for 2 to 3 weeks at a time, so consider this a thank-you gift to you guys for hanging with me and supporting.
Second, this is SUPER rough. Have not done a reread, as I spent all day writing. Lots that will need to be cleaned up, and lots that will probably change.
Lastly, and related to the second note: this is a good opportunity to show you guys that edits are important. There is a place named in these chapters that has never shown up before, and it will be woven in earlier in the story in edits! So don't be too jarred by its sudden appearance!
Cheers all!
-Bryce
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
- On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you!
That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
TerryTG
Nah that was her thing. That's what was atypical about her CAD. In rei's case it's his type shift.
Lukas
Alright so it took me a little bit to get it read but its been a busy couple days. I have to say theres alot to unpack here and i think on of the most interesting will be whats cashes reaction to reis growth soec gonna be. Im kinda anticipating her being the betrayer on in some level. Regardless it is all good and these chapters are great.
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Didn’t dent have her first ones around that rank though? Wouldn’t have been too far fetched for Rei to have gotten one given his circumstances
TerryTG
Then again it was kind of dumb to expect it to be an external. He's C7 and externals are rare and almost exclusively for the higher tier S rankers. And he may have gotten type shift but in a sense it's a normal ability cause everyone has at least one by the time they're C4
Reginald Stuckey
Great chapter
LaFawn Scott
Ha, I hadn’t even registered the meaning of her name until I saw the team name. Bright red haired Aria. Such a great choice for team name.
Devin Jaros
Holy crap that was incredible! Loveeee the team name being about Aria!
Z.W.Heald
Great team name!!!!!
Darren Dyke
Cheeky 'especially when he moves'.... you got me sir. You fucking got me. Reinforced spine is good too...
Wraithmarked Creative
You might enjoy this: https://www.reddit.com/r/Warformed/comments/sfs77j/if_iron_prince_was_ever_made_into_an_anime_what/
Aubrey Listi
Anyone else hear an anime theme song playing in the back of their head after the team name announcement? 😍 I love their team name, btw
Adam Roberts
Yah I’m not gonna lie, I’m disappointed it’s not. I almost feel like we got rickrolled lol. But After the art we’ve seen for book 2 not showing any, I guess we shouldn’t be surprised either. Just had my hopes up!
Joanne Hans
That was Great!
TerryTG
I knew it wasn't going to be an external. It's just too early. But GOD DAMN.
Marcus
Thanks for the great chapter. Loving that team name. Also felt so good to have that extra pages to sink my teeth into this week. Always seems like the pages are finished right when Im hitting my stride while reading.
Eli
That was amazing as always, thank you
Shannon Bryce
That was great
