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OTV: Chapter 3: Page 89
🕑 Added 2019-07-30 01:02:03 +0000 UTCThe humans arrive. Things are getting serious now.
To answer some questions from the previous page: In this story, the monsters in the original world don't bleed, they 'scar' from physical injuries if it's serious enough. The monsters in the OTHER world however appear to be different. In more ways than one, as you will see in time.
Also something I should bring up, I'm afraid this isn't a DeltaRune comic. :( I know a lot of people are hoping this is, but I did start it half a year before DeltaRune came out, so all of the similarities are coincidences. (Though I DID add some DeltaRune references in the pages when it came out ^^) There's still a chance I will add more DeltaRune references, but the main story has already been planned out. I really hope everyone will enjoy it anyway!
(The above comments are more for when I post it on DeviantArt and Tumblr, since I have been getting lots of questions there, heh)
Comments
AbsoluteDream
Thank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
Frisk had a handy ability to load the last save point and memorize Undyne's moves. XD I know I died a few times to Undyne. But yes, this Undyne is technically stronger too, which can be pretty frightening. Ah yes, I liked this dialogue better. ^^
Daishi
Wow, the final version of this has fantastic facial expressions; MK & Asriel are both clearly terrified and confused. The blurred effect in the final panel does a great job implying the force with which the ground is being torn apart by the attack coming up through it.
Rupix
I was about to say "So what if Undyne comes in? A kid can kcik ehr butt. Why are the adults afraid of her?" But if that's a different world then maybe that no longer applies. Also, you changed the text in the last panel. Sneaky!
AbsoluteDream
Thank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
I do post my comic on DeviantArt here: https://www.deviantart.com/absolutedream/gallery/66164198/over-the-void-comic , and Tumblr here https://undertale-over-the-void.tumblr.com/post/173491827467/cover-prologue-chapter-1-chapter-2-chapter-3-plot . I hope to sometime post everything on Twitter as well if I can ever find the time. I hope one of these is better!
That-Guy
So many new faces and places, coming at incredible paces, and I dont think any one knows what to expect next. Keep up the great work dude.
That-Guy
So, is there a place you upload older pages as like a more easily loadable website/app like webtoon or something similar? cause patron doesn't load the best on my tablet especially when scrolling really far down.
AbsoluteDream
Heh heh, there's one more with another dramatic entrance coming up soonish... Dramatic entrances everywhere. ^^;
AbsoluteDream
Yes!
AbsoluteDream
Probably not. XD
AbsoluteDream
:D
That-Guy
*excited person noises*
Daishi
Well. This isn't gonna do much for human - monster relations here now, is it? :|
Daishi
The humans seem to like *their* dramatic entrances, too xP
A Wild Magikarp
*Spear Of Justice Intensifies*
AbsoluteDream
She loves those dramatic entrances, haha
Zw
Undyne with the dramatic entrance!
