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OTV: Chapter 2: Page 76
🕑 Added 2019-05-10 18:14:03 +0000 UTCThey're just full of good ideas, huh?
I want to add some sound effects for the waterfall, but I haven't figured out the best sound to use, haha.
Almost didn't have time to finish this week, heh. Decided to take out that last panel with Frisk. There were already two close ups of them, so I thought it was a little redundant, haha.
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AbsoluteDream
Haha, I do get it. ^^
AbsoluteDream
Oh, those are good ideas! Unfortunately I didn't have the time to edit the page, but I really appreciate it! That resource is super useful!
Jeeley
Ooh I had never fully focused on Frisk's hands before! I think once this chapter's complete, I'll have to give the series a re-read :)
Gam3rPro64
Looks like our three protagonists have stumbled into the Upside Down! Get it? It's a Stranger Things reference.
ZaCloud
Very cool, and good edit decision. For the water, maybe something along the lines of "Shshshshhhh" or "Shaaaaaaa" or undulating patterns of "patter""patter""patter", etc. I didn't really find relevant results on this resource, but it COULD be useful with alternative search terms, possibly for other sound-effects in case you ever want ideas: http://www.writtensound.com/index.php?term=water
AbsoluteDream
It'd be tough to explain how a waterfall suddenly appeared out of nowhere. XD
AbsoluteDream
You know what, I stared at that second panel for a while trying to figure out what was wrong with it. That was probably a good way to tell that I needed to get more sleep, heh. Thank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
Thank you! It can be difficult to tell what Frisk is thinking sometimes, haha. If you can't tell by their expression, perhaps their hands can give you an idea.
Myshu
Haha, MK's stretching logic is trying to be reassuring, but we can tell it's not working. Good thing Frisk knows how to push forward in a pinch. XD
Daishi
heh, "Where the hell did that come from??" ...the underground isn't exactly unstable, having lasted for so long - our kiddos might wanna start thinking a bit before diving forth. D: [Also Papyrus is misspelled in the second panel] I'm with Jeeley on this one, I love how much body language you give the characters. It's obvious even without the dialogue or context that Asriel is anxious and a bit worried, while MK is kinda confused and trying not to get worried himself.
Jeeley
Haha, I love how MK curls his tail round in the finals panels there. What with Asriel holding his hands, does Frisk have a tell when they're anxious/nervous?
