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OTV: Chapter 2: Page 57
🕑 Added 2018-12-24 11:34:11 +0000 UTCHere we go, chapter 2! Should be interesting! (I head canon Grillby as selectively mute, and prefers to use hand signs to communicate, except for those he's closest to. I also head canon that Papyrus likes dinosaur sprinkles.)
I flopped around quite a bit with the dialogue here. Papyrus tends to have pretty wordy dialogue, heh. Hope this doesn't look too crowded!
I also just realized that I need to get at least two pages ahead within the next month since I'm going for surgery early February, and I won't be doing much of anything for a couple weeks, haha. We'll see how far ahead I can get!
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AbsoluteDream
Aw thanks! ^^
Jeeley
Oooh, cool detail for the river reflections!
AbsoluteDream
Hmm, Perhaps.
bluberry2600xx
is that an...! u n d e r s w a p r e f e r e n c e ?
AbsoluteDream
Haha, gotta love Papyrus. XD
Myshu
Ahaha, "ON WE PRESS" cracked me up. I love how Papyrus can railroad a conversation when he needs to.
AbsoluteDream
Pfff, Bagsriel. XD And thank you!
AbsoluteDream
Thank you very much!
AbsoluteDream
Haha, I wonder how many of these characters have dreamt about their own AUs?
AbsoluteDream
Oh yes, it's nothing to worry about. ^^
AbsoluteDream
Thank you very much! Papyrus likes to talk a lot, but I always love hearing what he has to say, heh. I'm glad it's not too much of an issue here.
Daishi
I'm a fan of papyrus being simultaneously the jubilant juvenile he is, but still socially aware of people - basically not a dummy, just someone who sees the best in things. Wordy dialogue is only an issue if it doesn't pertain to what's going on, so it seems fine here.
Bla Bla
What's the surgery for if I may ask? Are you okay?
A_Xenomorph
Monster Kid already making AUs lol
Zw
Hope everything goes well with the surgery!
Jeeley
The continuing adventures of Bagsriel XD And best of luck in the New Year D:
AbsoluteDream
Yep, he's pretty good at it. XD
StrikeYoko
Papyrus, master of evading risky topics xD
