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OTV: Chapter 1: Page 40
🕑 Added 2018-09-06 09:23:21 +0000 UTC NextPoor Asgore. D:
But Alphys is back! Along with Undyne this time. ^^ We'll be back with the Dreemurr family soon enough, though.
Why is Alphys is so tired?
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AbsoluteDream
Haha, I'm glad to hear that! I love Undyne's 'undying' enthusiasm. XD And yes, I like to think it's both! haha
Myshu
Undyne must be a blast to write. You've definitely captured her energy right out of the gate. Also, Alphys must be either so tired or so comfortable in their relationship that she is forever UNFAZED by these outburts. XD
Jeeley
Ah so true! Stay determined ;P
AbsoluteDream
Yes, Toriel and Asgore's relationship is better at this point, like reluctant friendship. Toriel still has a difficult time looking past what happened. Also, you are correct with Alphys feeling some guilt over Asriel. Thank you so much for the comment!
AbsoluteDream
Undyne's awesome. XD
AbsoluteDream
FUHUHUHUHU!
AbsoluteDream
I feel like I'm missing the reference haha, but it's the 'paper birds' the kids mentioned making with Alphys. ^^
AbsoluteDream
Yep, there's some progress. ^^
AbsoluteDream
Thank you! I know, for a moment I thought I made a mistake when I was putting the page number in. XD Close to 50!
Jeeley
Man I love Undyne in your style! Can’t believe we’re already on page 40 XD
Bla Bla
I like that she’s talking to him and is thankful for what he does.
A_Xenomorph
Ooh is that a Paper Crane reference? Haha
bluberry2600xx
NGAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
StrikeYoko
Pfffh, Undyne's just perfect xD
Daishi
Oh my. Those neck gills are positively unsettling. Looks like maybe Tori's at least past the "I hate everything you stand for" phase with Asgore; though I wonder if that's an effort to reduce the impact their relationship has on the kids, or a genuine detachment from her old stance on him? There's probably multiple reasons for Alphys' tiredness, but at least some of it probably stems from babysitting Asriel, whom she likely still feels guilty about. Undyne's face at the end is great. Her smile goes from wickedly excited to "only marginally less so" when she notices Alphys has become a tired tail. Nice work!
