OTV: Chapter 1: Page 36
🕑 Added 2018-08-09 01:16:35 +0000 UTC NextA page that is literally all jokes. I'm sorry, but I had to. ^^;
I promise things will get more interesting! XD
Next page might take some time to finish, only because I need to catch up on thumbnails, heh.
I am enjoying these long pages though!
I might tweak the backgrounds/shading of these pages later.
Comments
Daishi
I could see it! but I don't think he's as good at it. He tries, and it comes off as well-meaning, but my hc is frisk having the wits about them to make the right statement.
AbsoluteDream
Haha, the characters are fun to work with. I love their personalities. XD I like to think that Asriel likes bad jokes, like his mom, heh.
Daishi
Azzy snickering at his own joke gives me life. Seriously, he's entirely too cute. Frisk with the swift jab from left field, man, where'd that come from haha. I get the feeling MK tends to err on the side of "gives it his best, but still needs help".
AbsoluteDream
D'aw, thank you so much!
bluberry2600xx
I'm so glad Casper puts so much time and effort into his work. And plus it raises anticipation for the next page! OWO
AbsoluteDream
Haha, oh yes, Sans doesn't take anything seriously. XD
bluberry2600xx
*papyrus screams internally* XD
AbsoluteDream
Haha, glad it got a laugh! XD
AbsoluteDream
How do you organize a space party? You "Planet" hehe
Myshu
Ahahaha, Frisk with the uppercut. That kid's got a mean streak and I love it--good thing Sans can appreciate it, too. XD
Cent
that last joke made me laugh way more than it should've oh my go
StrikeYoko
Yeah, I thought so :D
bluberry2600xx
Why doesn't the astronaut have a wife? he needs space
AbsoluteDream
Haha, thanks! Frisk doesn't talk much, but will if they need to. ^^ And I'm happy to hear you like the long pages too!
bluberry2600xx
Well I suppose it should wrap up how Frisk saved Azzy at the end, after all they both were on the cover XD
AbsoluteDream
Haha, he gets it from his mom. XD
AbsoluteDream
Haha, glad to hear that! XD Chapter 1 will mainly be about what their lives are like on the surface, but by the end, it will be more focused on Asriel. Other characters will appear, such as Papyrus, Undyne, Alphys, Toriel, and Asgore. ^^
AbsoluteDream
No problem! ^^
Jeeley
Sans’ expression for “but I heard that one” is golden XD And it’s good to see an AU where Frisk talks. And yh I agree now I think one long page is better than 2 short pages a week :)
StrikeYoko
Noaw cute Azzy boi knows bad jokes too >w
bluberry2600xx
These actually made me laugh! XD So what will Chapter 1 be about?
Tierra Mackey
Okay. Thanks!
AbsoluteDream
Haha. XD Well, I mostly try to give big moments big panels, and I try to vary the shots (close up, medium shot, long shot, etc). I'm not an expert at it though, so I'm still experimenting. ^^ Drawing thumbnails of the pages first help explore different ideas without committing to too much detail, heh. Hope this helps a little!
AbsoluteDream
I'm happy to hear that, me too. XD
Tierra Mackey
Pffffft! Frisk is savage!🤣🤣🤣 Do you have any tips on making comics? Like when to make the panels big or small?
A_Xenomorph
Honestly I love hanging on to these moments haha.