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Unearthed the soundtrack of the rejected version of "Love Me, Love Me, Love Me".
🕑 Added 2023-06-27 09:06:21 +0000 UTCNice one, me.
As for "Love Me, Love Me, Love Me" the song and lyrics were all rejected once and newly rewritten, and now the source material has been unearthed.
First of all, the way the song develops is slightly different. For example, drums are suddenly added in the intro, and drums continue after the chorus.
It's more solid, or clickier, or less reverberant, or something like that, than the finished version.
I thought it needed to be more interesting, so I decided to make it sound more psychedelic and frightening, so I took out the drums at key points and added effects and echoes to give it a mysterious, good feeling, and that's how I ended up with it.
As for the lyrics, I thought they were too abstract and I didn't know what they were talking about, so I decided to make the lyrics more concrete... so I rejected them.
But I thought the chorus part was good, so I kept much of the chorus part and created the rest of the story line.
And the melody of the chorus is low. lol
If you are used to hearing the finished version, the chorus is coming~! you were expecting to hear the chorus, but then it became lower and lower. I feel like I'm being let down.
I had a good feeling that the melody of the chorus was well composed from memory, but the low melody was always a problem for me. I fixed it by saying that since it is the chorus, it should go up high after all.
Also, the last part, "ahh~," was not fitting because the letters were forced into the song, so it should be fixed.
So, please enjoy!
Here's the lyrics and translated version by DeepL.
I think this translation has a lot of minor nuances wrong.
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The day you fell into the red hole I made
My hand was so tight that your little body burst
The day I sank into the hole you buried me in
You were so busy dancing that you left your crushed hand behind
Hey, don't go, don't go, turn around
You must feel sorry for me
Love me, love me, love me, more and more
Love me, love me like crazy
I'm lonely, I'm lonely, I'm lonely, look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, I can't stop
Uh...
The rubber doll, blackened by the breath and hands of spirits...
I'll make the rubber doll blackened by the breath and hands of spirits back into my shape
Dirty like a toy pretending to be new
You're the only one who can keep the oilcloth.
It's as clingy and irritating as a muddy bog.
You must be so lonely.
Love me, love me, love me, more and more
Love me, love me like crazy
I want you, I want you, I want you, please, it has to be you
Love me, love me, love me, more and more
Love me, love me like crazy
Sad, sad, sad, sad, it's got to be you
Hey, I can't hold it in, Hah...
I'm sorry. Oh.
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僕が空けた紅い穴に君が落ちた日
小さい身体 弾けるほど 僕の手が握られた
君が埋めた僕の穴に僕が沈む日
君は一人 踊りに夢中で 潰れた手を見捨てた
ねえ いかないで ねえ ねえ 振り向いて
かわいそうでしょう ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ
愛して 愛して 愛して もっともっと
愛して 愛して 狂おしいほどに
寂しい 寂しい こっちを 向いて向いて ねえ 止まらないの ああ
Uh...
八百万の神様の 吐息と手垢で
真っ黒になった ゴム人形を 僕の形に戻して
新しいフリしたおもちゃみたく汚れた
油粘土の飼い主なんて 君にしかなれないよ
泥沼みたく ぎら ぎら ときめいて
寂しそうでしょう ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ ねえ
愛して 愛して 愛して もっともっと
愛して 愛して 狂おしいほどに
君がいい 君がいい お願い 君じゃないと ああ 救い出して
愛して 愛して 愛して もっともっと
愛して 愛して 狂おしいほどに
悲しい 悲しい 悲しい 君じゃないと
ねえ 抑えきれない Hah...
ごめんなさい ああ
Comments
evil-eric
Kikuo your music really touches me.
akya
I LOV ETHIS
