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TEoR 273 WIP
🕑 Added 2020-08-31 04:13:58 +0000 UTCOk, i would ask you guys to read this update first if you haven't yet: https://www.patreon.com/posts/41047520
Well, at the moment i am wearing splints on my left hand and that sketch was the most i could work on without too much pain or over exerting my fingers. For now i will post the script of this page in this description so you guys can get an idea of what is happening.
The finished page should be posted in about two weeks.
Page 273
Panel 1: Mari is worried, Ron can’t explain. They sit at a couch.
Mari: What happened to you? What happened to your cast?
Ron: My cast? It’s gone? Did that tortoise break it?
Mari: Tortoise!? Broke it?! What did you DO?
Panel 2: Mari lift his sweater to check the scars.
Mari: And where did these come from!?
Ron: Scars? Ah. I can explain. …I can’t explain.
Mari: You’re scaring me, Ron! Please, you can tell me! You can trust me, I won’t tell a soul!
Ron: …It’s kind of unbelievable.
Mari: Try me.
Ron: …Okay…
Panel 3:
Ron narration: I ended up telling Mari the whole story. I guess I lost track of time. Mari was attentive, but silent. It was like she had a million questions for me, but had no idea where to begin, so she didn’t. Every now and then she would stare at the floor, only to eventually lock eyes with me again.
Ron: …And since my apartment has been destroyed, I decided to come here.
Panel 4:
Mari: Geez… that’s pretty weird and stuff, huh?
Ron: Honestly, I wasn’t expecting you to be so… cool with this. Are you okay?
Mari: Oh? Yeah, I’m fine. Very confused, but fine.
Panel 5: Fio is shocked and Ron just realized she was there. Over Serving tea in a cup.
Mari: Fio’s a little shocked though.
Ron: How long has she been here!?
Comments
Deafening Noise
that last panel xD
ghostbane
Love these sketch works ! And damn poor fio is just trying to vibe and Ron spooks everyone with his fugitive takes
