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The Stepmother (Complete)

🕑 Added 2021-11-03 23:24:39 +0000 UTC

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Woke fruit

Glad you liked :)

dzstztg

Fun little continuation series! I liked the final cap - tied together the last few character arcs well and the last paragraph leaves room for more fun in the future :)

Woke fruit

Yay love to hear it :)

Cerial442

I think this was great. I enjoy the long stories and multiple transformations. Especially enjoyed the beginning when they knew what was happening, but powerless to prevent it. Trisha is a great protagonist and hopefully we see her again down the line. All in all, I think the whole thing was amazing.

MagicCobra911

Your welcome🙂! Edit: Admittedly there was one section mentioning Olivia in the page before the final one that I missed so that last critique may not hold up all that much.

Woke fruit

Thanks for the feedback :)

MagicCobra911

Well this was interesting…I’m not gonna lie though it’s not exactly the part 2 I was hoping for. I think it went on a little too long and had too many characters shoe horned in. Also I feel like Olivia got sidelined too much in this I was hoping for a little more elaboration on her state of being in the final page. Still I appreciate the effort on a part 2.