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ときのそらゾファー兵化 part.1
🕑 Added 2025-02-23 08:13:56 +0000 UTC お待たせしました。時間がかかるかと思いましたが、ついに完成しました。色々の世話になったが特に日本語翻訳。悪墜ち研究機構の ＠研さんに翻訳を手伝ってもらって、本当に感謝しています。いつも応援してくれてありがとうございます。
Comments
axelkrafte
Regarding the second to last page: I hope that when you design Tokino Sora's Chimera form, you don't go too overboard. Of the original DynaRangers: Saori's design is good, at least when she has the full head mask on, because it completely hides her human features and makes her look totally inhuman. But I was never a fan of Miki's Chimera design; the lower half of her face is exposed, her hair is still visible, and she's got that weird eyemask thing. so she just looks like a human with a supervillain costume. So I hope Tokino Sora's Chimera form looks more like Saori's: the usual striped bodysuit, complete enclosure of the head, maybe a star-shaped thing on her head, but nothing fancier than that.
axelkrafte
Another small thing I noticed. On page 20 (the one with the tongue x-rays), there's a bit of leftover English text that says "Saori 「」".
axelkrafte
Excellent work so far. One small correction: Pages 14 and 15 are out of order.
Todd Liu
Good manga,Looking forward to more excellent works from you.
