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Nightwing #30 - Reinterpretation project - Pages 1-7 -Wip
🕑 Added 2023-05-01 03:52:25 +0000 UTCThis is what we got so far! Dialogues are the last priority for now, since this is an early stage of the work and modifications can still happen.
I'd share the original script with the narrative my boyfriend is writing but they're in Spanish and I don't have the time transcript them all. They're very messy to read as well, there's anotations everywhere.
The first pages consist on a more paused, enviromental introduction of their dynamic. There's a sequence of three panels as a pattern, one panel of the present time, and two that represent flashbacks to the past. The flashbacks' purpose is to show how common it is for them to sparr when they need to bond and understand each other. Once the fight starts, the blows are supposed to happen in order of who is speaking/presenting an argument. Batman starts dominating because in the original he is the one who starts with the strong points.
This project is going to have a lot of pages, and it's going to end on a NSFW scene. We are trying to build a narrative so we're not gonna rush things. I'll try to present an update of this fan-comic once per month, twice if I have a particular productive week. You'll get to see every single step of this creation process and provide feedback if you want. Perhaps some people are gonna grow a little impatient, because this will not be finished next month, neither will be done in two. It's going to take us time. The less we rush it, the better the final quality.
My regular art production will remain the same. This project it's going to keep existing on the background, slowly progressing month by month. With my partner's help I'm able to draw so much pages on so little time, so I'm optimistic - and I'll reward him with more SasoSaku food for making this effort for the sake of the BruDick fandom lmao-
Temptative dialogue distribution per-page:
Page 1:
Bruce: How many times have we done this?
Page 2:
Bruce: How many rules have I given you? Where you fight.
Bruce: How you fight.
Bruce: We’ve done this so many times.
Page 3:
Bruce: We’ve had so many rules.
Bruce: We need to do it again, you and me. I need to see if they broke you. (El sindicato del Crimen)
Bruce: I need to see if you still have the heart you once had.
Page 4:
Bruce: So, one more time, Dick. But not there’s only one rule…
Bruce: You will win.
Page 5:
Bruce: You let the Crime Syndicate capture you
Bruce: you let them torture you.
Bruce: You let them give your secrets to the world. (Primer cambio en el dialogo, borrar la negrita de “crime sindicate”, ponerla en “capture”. Agregado de negrita a “your secrets”)
Page 6:
Dick: You weren’t there.
Page 7:
Bruce: You let them turn you into a bomb.
Bruce: You let them kill you.
Bruce: Before Luthor rescued you, you let everyone watch you die.*
Dick: I was trying to save people.
Bruce: I trained you to live,
Comments
Oh!!! This is very exciting!! I am also loving the dynamics on the fight and movement poses. Very nice. Not the easiest thing ro achieve on paper. Good grasp of anatomy.
