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MA 3, 10.2: Smoke
🕑 Added 2025-11-21 16:00:09 +0000 UTCAN: I've decided to split Book 1 into two books at the point of Su Lian's "Fading Phoenix" chapter. So, this is now, officially, Book 3.
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His pace increased. He hadn't thought he could move faster, but somehow he found reserves he didn't know existed. Terror and rage combined into fuel, and he flew down the mountain trail with speed that probably looked supernatural to any hypothetical observer.
Please be wrong. Please let it be something else. Please let it be a controlled burn, a clearing project, anything but what he feared—
He crested the final ridge that overlooked the village and his heart stopped.
Everything was on fire.
Not metaphorically.
His village — Old Bao's village, the place that had taken him in and fed him and given him six months of peace and called him friend and family — was burning. Flames climbed from at least a dozen structures, orange and hungry and spreading fast through the wooden construction. The roofs, dried by autumn sun and made of thatch and wooden shingles, burned with particular enthusiasm. Smoke rose in a thick column that reminded him sickeningly of what he'd seen from Five Pine Village earlier, creating a dark stain against the clear evening sky.
And in the village square, barely visible through the smoke and chaos, he could see them.
Figures moving through the destruction. Too large to be villagers, their silhouettes wrong—too dense, too powerful. Body Tempering Martial Artists, almost certainly, their enhanced physiques evident even at this distance. He counted quickly: six. Six bandits, moving through his home with brutal efficiency.
They were dragging people from their homes even as the buildings burned. He could see it happening—figures being pulled from doorways, thrown to the ground, searched for valuables. Looting. The organized pillage that followed military conquest.
And worse. So much worse.
Chen Mu heard screaming. Not the chaotic screams of people fleeing fire, but specific, targeted screaming. The screams of women being violated. The sound of violence being done. Of people being hurt deliberately. Systematically.
Horror and rage crashed through Chen Mu in equal measure, so intense it was almost physical. His vision actually narrowed, tunneling down until all he could see was the burning village and the men destroying it. His hands clenched on the sabers' hilts with enough force that the leather wrapping groaned.
His body was already in motion, already rushing down the ridge trail with reckless speed. Stones scattered beneath his feet. Tree branches whipped at his face and arms, leaving stinging scratches he didn't feel. His entire world had narrowed to a single imperative.
Get there. Stop them. Kill them all.
He hit the outskirts of the village at a full sprint — his legs pumping, his lungs working like bellows, sabers gripped in white-knuckled hands.
The first bandit he encountered was looting Chief Tian's house. The bandit was bent over a wooden chest, rifling through its contents with single-minded focus, tossing aside clothes and tools in search of anything valuable.
He didn't see Chen Mu coming. Didn't hear him over the roar of the flames and his own muttered cursing.
Chen Mu's saber took him in the side of the neck — not a clean decapitation because the blade was too dull and Chen Mu's angle was slightly wrong... but it hardly mattered. The cut was deep enough to sever the carotid artery and windpipe. Deep enough that the man's eyes went wide with shock and he tried to scream but could only manage a wet, gurgling sound.
Blood pumped from the wound in rhythmic pulses synchronized with his dying heartbeat. He dropped the valuables he'd been clutching — the village's meager budget of silver coins scattering across the ground with metallic tinkling — and brought his hands up to his throat in a futile attempt to staunch the flow. Then his legs folded and he collapsed, his body convulsing as his brain realized it wasn't receiving oxygen.
Chen Mu was already moving to the next target. There was no need to confirm the kill. No time for anything but forward momentum and violence.
A larger man — massive, his physique suggesting Stage Four Muscle Refining at least — was dragging a woman from a burning house. Chen Mu couldn't see exactly who through the smoke, just saw the desperate struggle, heard muffled feminine screaming.
The bandit must have heard something — or perhaps his instincts warned him of danger. He dropped his victim and spun, reaching for the war hammer strapped to his back with impressive speed. The weapon came around in a horizontal swing that would have pulped Chen Mu's skull if it connected — the massive iron head moving with terrible momentum, fast enough to create a whistle in the air.
Chen Mu ducked under it, feeling the wind of its passage ruffle his white hair, and drove both sabers up under the man's ribs. The crude — but massive — cavalry blades punched through leather armor (barely, as their dulled edges made penetration challenging), and found the soft tissue beneath.
Liver. Kidneys. Major blood vessels.
The bandit's eyes went wide with shock and pain. His mouth opened, working soundlessly, and blood bubbled from his lips. He tried to bring the hammer back around for another strike, but his arms weren't responding anymore. Neural signals disrupted by catastrophic trauma.
Chen Mu ripped the sabers free — they caught on bone and cartilage, making the motion harder than it should have been, requiring actual effort — and the bandit dropped. His massive body hit the ground like a felled tree, and the war hammer rolled from his loosening fingers.
Two down.
Four more to go.
Chen Mu pushed deeper into the village, into the smoke and chaos, his eyes watering from the acrid air but his vision still functional. He could hear screaming.
So much screaming.
The crash of collapsing structures.
The roar of flames consuming wood and thatch and the accumulated possessions of simple lives.
A third bandit emerged from Widow Lan's house — or what had once been Widow Lan's house. The structure was fully engulfed now, flames visible through every window and door, the roof already starting to collapse. His arms were full of looted goods — copper pots, preserved Spirit Boar meat, a small wooden box that probably contained whatever meager valuables she'd accumulated over her seventy years of life.
He took one look at Chen Mu — blood-spattered, wild-eyed, dual-wielding rust-stained sabers — and his face went white. He immediately dropped everything, his hands scrambling for the sword at his hip.
Too slow.
Far, far too slow.
Chen Mu had already closed the distance, and his left saber opened the man's throat in a single economical slash. No wasted motion. No excessive force. Just the minimum motion required to sever everything important.
The bandit stumbled backward, hands going to his neck, and fell back into the burning house he'd just emerged from. The flames embraced him enthusiastically, and his gurgling scream lasted perhaps five seconds before the smoke took him.
Three down.
Three more to go.
There was no thought anymore in Chen Mu's actions. No careful planning. No moral calculus about the appropriate level of force. Just movement and violence and the absolute certainty that every single person who had participated in this attack needed to die.
He found the fourth and fifth together, attempting to set fire to one of the village's looted storage buildings. They had torches and were arguing about the best approach, their voices carrying through the smoke-filled air.
"—just throw them at the roof— "
"—no, you idiot, we need to get inside first, make sure it catches—"
They never finished the conversation.
Chen Mu attacked from behind, his approach masked by the smoke and the roar of surrounding fires. His sabers moved in a fluid, economical pattern that his body knew intimately — even if his mind didn't remember learning. The first bandit died without ever fully understanding what had happened, Chen Mu's saber entering the base of his skull.
Severing the brain stem. Causing instant death.
The second managed to turn, managed to raise his torch defensively like some kind of crude weapon, and even got out half of a scream before Chen Mu's other saber punched through his eye socket and into his brain.
The torch fell, still burning. Chen Mu kicked it away from the storage structure with automatic efficiency. At least that much could be saved. At least something could be preserved from this nightmare.
Five down.
One more to go.
He heard crying. Not an adult crying — a child. The sound cut through the chaos like a blade, pure and terrified and heartbreaking.
Chen Mu sprinted toward the sound, vaulting over a collapsed wall, weaving through smoke that would have choked a normal person. His enhanced constitution made the toxic air merely uncomfortable rather than immediately debilitating.
He found the source: Little An-An was trapped under a pile of rubble — what looked like part of her family's house that had collapsed when the roof burned through. Wooden beams and broken thatch and shattered pottery had pinned her legs, and she was sobbing with pain and terror.
Yín Lìng, her pet fox, was beside her —pressed against her side, making distressed yipping sounds, the animal's distress obvious in her agitated movements. The fox's luminous amber eyes were wide with fear, and her beautiful silvery fur was matted with soot.
The sixth bandit was advancing on them both with a cruel smile twisting his features. He had a short sword in his hand — the blade notched and stained with dried blood, clearly having seen use already today.
"Well, well," he was saying, his voice carrying false cheerfulness. "Boss said to take the good lookin' women, but I bet a pretty little thing like you could—"
He didn't finish the sentence because Chen Mu's saber entered his back and emerged through his chest.
The blade punched through leather armor, between ribs, through a lung and into his heart with the kind of precision that came from understanding anatomy at an almost supernatural level. The bandit looked down at the blade point protruding from his sternum with almost comical surprise. His mouth opened, closed, opened again. A wet, gasping sound emerged. Then blood bubbled from his lips in a dark froth.
Chen Mu ripped the blade free with a violent twist and the bandit collapsed like a puppet with cut strings.
"Brother Mu!" An-An's voice was thick with tears and smoke inhalation and overwhelming relief. "Brother Mu, I can't move! My legs—"
Chen Mu dropped the sabers — they'd served their purpose—and began pulling debris away with his bare hands. His strength made quick work of it: timbers that would have required multiple men to shift came away with single-handed effort. Broken pottery and thatch flew aside like they weighed nothing.
In less than a minute, he'd cleared enough space to lift An-An free. She clung to him with desperate strength, her small body shaking, and he could feel her tears soaking through his shirt.
"They killed Papa," she sobbed against his chest. "I saw them — they killed him when he tried to fight, and Mama ran and they chased her and... and..." She couldn't continue, the words dissolving into incoherent crying.
Chen Mu held her carefully, mindful of his strength, one arm supporting her while his free hand checked her legs for injuries. Bruises, some scrapes, possibly a sprained ankle, but nothing broken. She'd be okay... physically, at least.
Emotionally? That was a different question entirely.
"You're safe now," he said, his voice coming out hoarse from smoke inhalation and suppressed emotion. "You're safe. I'm here. Everything's going to be okay."
The lies tasted like ash in his mouth, but what else could he say? He set her down gently, then grabbed Yín Lìng — the fox was terrified but uninjured, her silver fur just dirty — and placed the animal in An-An's arms. "Can you walk?"
She nodded, wiping her eyes, leaving streaks of clean skin through the soot on her face.
"Good. Run to the village square! Find anyone who's still alive and get them to the well. Stay away from the fires. Go!"
She fled, cradling Yín Lìng against her chest, limping but mobile. Chen Mu watched her for just a moment, ensuring she was actually moving in the right direction, then turned back to the burning village.
The sounds of battle had stopped. Six bandits were all dead. But the fires were still spreading, still consuming, and he needed to—
"Chen Mu!" A voice, weak and pain-filled, called from somewhere to his left.
A voice he'd heard every day for seven and a half months.
A voice that had called him 'boy' with such obvious affection.
A voice that had shared meals and stories and comfortable silences.
Chen Mu's blood ran cold because he recognized that voice.
He found Old Man Bao lying in the wreckage of what had been their shared hut. The structure had burned almost completely, leaving only a few charred support beams still standing like blackened fingers reaching toward the darkening sky. And Bao was pinned beneath one of them — a massive timber that must have collapsed when the roof gave way.
Blood soaked through his simple tunic from multiple wounds. Deep cuts through his arms, defensive wounds from trying to block. There was a terrible gash across his abdomen that was bleeding sluggishly, dark blood pooling beneath him. He had a collapsed lung from the crushing weight of the beam, making each breath a visible struggle.
Chen Mu fell to his knees beside him, his hands already moving to assess the injuries with a detached, clinical part of his mind. But even as his medical knowledge catalogued the damage, another part of him — the part that was still just Chen Mu, still just a man who'd found peace here — was screaming denial.
Severed artery in the left thigh. Major blood loss. Probably minutes remaining before bleeding out.
Deep penetrating wound through the lower abdomen. Possible damage to liver, kidneys, intestines. Internal bleeding. Even with perfect conditions and immediate surgery, questionable survival chances.
Collapsed lung from crushing trauma. Breathing compromised, oxygen supply insufficient for healing.
Too much damage. Too many wounds. Too much blood already lost.
Even with his level of skill...
He couldn't save him.
"Don't talk," Chen Mu said, his hands already moving to apply pressure to the worst bleeding, to try to staunch the flow even though he knew it was futile. "Don't move. Just stay still. I'll get you fixed right up. You're going to be fine. This is nothing. Remember when you told me about getting gored by that boar in your youth? That was surely much worse than this. This is just—"
"Boy." Bao's hand — bloody, trembling, but still possessing surprising strength — caught Chen Mu's wrist and squeezed. "Stop. Stop lying to an old man who knows better."
"You're not—"
"I am." Bao coughed, and blood flecked his lips. "And I don't have long. So shut up and listen! For once in your overthinking life, just... listen."
Chen Mu's hands stilled. His vision was blurring —when had he started crying?— but he forced himself to meet Bao's gaze.
"My time... is up," the old man said, his voice fading with each word, each syllable requiring visible effort. "And that's... that's fine. I've lived a good life. A long life. Longer than I had any right to expect. But Chen Mu... the Little Flower. Xiao Hua. I tried—" Another cough, more blood. "I tried to hide her when they came. Told her to hide in the cellar, to stay quiet. But they found her anyway. They had spirit hounds with them. Hunting dogs that can—" His breath caught, the pain momentarily overwhelming.
Chen Mu felt something cold and terrible settle into his chest, spreading like ice through water. "Where did they take her?"
"They took her and the other young women up the mountain. To their... stronghold." Bao's grip tightened with desperate urgency. "The old Azure Cloud Sect. Heard them talking. They've set up there, in the ruins. But Chen Mu... Son, don't— "
Another wet cough. The old man's remaining lung was filling with fluids. He did not have long.
"—don't do anything stupid. They said... there's a cultivator leading them. A real Ling Qi cultivator. You can't fight that. You're strong, yes, impossibly strong, but you're not—" Another cough, weaker now. "You're not a cultivator. You'll just... die."
"I'll get her back," Chen Mu said quietly. His hands were gentle as they adjusted Bao's position, trying to make him comfortable even though they both knew it was pointless. "I promise you. I'll get her back."
"You'll die." The old man's voice was barely a whisper now, his strength fading with each passing second. "And then what... what happens to the village? To the people who... survived? If you die, who will protect them?"
"I'm not leaving her with them!" Chen Mu felt tears running down his face, hot tracks through the soot and grime. His throat was so tight it hurt to speak. "If I have any value at all — if this strength I have, these skills I don't remember learning, if any of it matters — then I will use them for this. For her. I can't... I won't..."
He couldn't finish. Couldn't articulate the absolute certainty that abandoning Xiao Hua to whatever these bandits had planned was not something he could live with. That some lines couldn't be crossed, some compromises couldn't be made.
Even if refusing them meant death.
Bao tried to say something else — perhaps words of comfort, perhaps more warnings, perhaps... just goodbye.
But his breath caught. His eyes went distant, unfocused, looking at something Chen Mu couldn't see.
"No." Chen Mu's voice was small, broken, the voice of a child rather than the deadly fighter he'd become. "No, Old Bao, please. Please don't leave. I can fix this! I can fix anything! I just need—I need time to—"
But there was nothing left to fix.
The old man who'd found him in the forest, naked and confused, who'd taken him in without question or demand for explanation, who'd shared his food and his home and his stories, who'd called him 'son' without ever requiring Chen Mu to earn the title — he was now gone.
The hand holding Chen Mu's wrist went slack. The labored breathing stopped. And the light in his eyes — the indefinable quality that made a body a person — had simply... left.
Chen Mu knelt there in the wreckage and the blood, holding a cooling hand, and felt something fundamental break inside him.
The peaceful dream called Chen Mu — the simple hunter, the helpful neighbor, the man who wanted nothing more than quiet village life and morning walks and evening meals with people who'd become family — that man had died with Old Man Bao.
What remained was something else.
Something that had been sleeping beneath the surface, waiting for the moment when gentleness and mercy would no longer suffice.
Chen Mu gently closed Bao's eyes, then stood. His movements were slow, deliberate, controlled with the kind of precision that came from intense emotion held in check by sheer force of will.
The village square had become a gathering point for survivors — he could see them clustering near the well, their faces smudged with soot, their eyes hollow with shock. Perhaps twenty people. Maybe twenty-five. From a village of fifty-odd souls.
Half of them gone. Dead or dying or taken.
He walked toward them with steady steps, and they parted before him like water before a ship's prow. They stared at him: at the blood covering his clothes (none of it his), at the cold emptiness in his eyes, at something in his bearing that made him suddenly seem foreign. Other. Dangerous in ways they hadn't fully recognized before.
Chief Tian limped toward him, supporting his wounded son. His face was haggard, aged a decade in a single day. "Chen Mu. Thank the gods you're alive. The bandits—"
"Are dead," Chen Mu said flatly. "All six of them. But there are more. A whole band, camped in the old Azure Cloud Sect buildings."
"We know." One of the women —Old Mei, whose daughter had been taken along with Xiao Hua— spoke up, her voice raw from crying and smoke inhalation. "They told us. Said they're claiming this territory. That we must either pay tribute or we get what the other villages got. They said—" Her voice broke, and she had to stop, swallow, try again. "They said they'll be back. That this is just the beginning."
"They took the younger women," another survivor added, wringing her hands with nervous energy born of fear and helplessness. "Said their boss wanted... wanted entertainment. That pretty girls were worth more alive than dead."
"I know." Chen Mu's voice was empty of emotion, carefully controlled. "Old Bao told me before he died. I'm going after them."
A chorus of protests erupted.
"You can't—
"There must be dozens of them—"
"They have a cultivator! A genuine Ling Qi cultivator leading them! You'll be slaughtered!"
"Even if you killed all six here, you're still just—"
"You're not—"
"It doesn't matter," Chen Mu interrupted, and the absolute certainty in his voice cut through the protests like a blade through silk. "I'm going. And I am bringing them back."
"You'll die," Chief Tian said, shaking his head, his voice heavy with defeat and resignation. The kind of exhausted acceptance that came from seeing all your worst fears realized. "And then who will protect the rest of us? Who will stop them when they come back? Chen Mu, I know you care about Xiao Hua and the others. We all do! And this choice pains me more than I can describe... But... But we have to think practically. If you die trying to save these people, what happens to the ones who survived? What happens to our future? Don't we matter too?"
It was a fair question. A logical question. The kind of cold calculation that survival often required. The needs of the many outweighing the needs of the few. Chen Mu dying in a hopeless rescue attempt would leave the survivors defenseless when the bandits inevitably returned.
But.
"There is no 'future' for any of us if I let this stand," Chen Mu said, and his voice carried absolute conviction. "They'll come back. Demand tribute. Take more women. Kill more men. You'll all die resisting or live the rest of your lives as slaves. No, this doesn't end unless someone makes it end. Unless someone demonstrates that attacking this village — any of the villages — has consequences too severe to accept."
He looked around at the survivors, at the soot-stained faces, the hollow eyes, the visible trauma. At Chief Tian and An-An and Old Mei and all the others who'd woven him into their community so thoroughly that their pain was his pain.
"I have to try," he said simply. "Even if I fail. Even if I die. I have to do this. Because if I don't... then what was any of this for? What was the point of saving you from the Boar King if I just let you be enslaved or killed by bandits? What is the point of having this strength, these skills, if I cannot use them to protect those I care about?"
He paused, then added more quietly: "And yes, I have to do this because she's important to me. More important than I knew until today. And I can't — I won't — leave her there with those animals."
No one had an answer to that.
They stood in silence, watching him with expressions that mixed fear, grief, and reluctant admiration.
Chen Mu turned away from them, from their fear and their protests. He walked toward what remained of his and Bao's hut — mostly ash now, the structure having burned almost completely. But he knew where certain things were kept, and his memory was perfect enough to navigate even this devastation.
The small chest where Bao had kept his old military uniform was miraculously unburned —protected by its position in a stone-lined recess, or, perhaps, just by random chance. Chen Mu opened it with hands that didn't shake, that remained perfectly steady despite the emotions churning beneath.
The uniform was dark cloth: black or very dark blue, faded with age but still intact. Sturdy fabric that had survived decades of storage. Bao had been a soldier in his youth, Chen Mu remembered. Had served in the provincial garrison at Onyx Pass before retiring to village life. He had never talked much about those years, had kept that part of his past carefully separate.
And now, Chen Mu would wear those clothes. Would carry that legacy into whatever came next.
He changed quickly, discarding his blood-soaked, soot-stained everyday clothes for the dark uniform. It fit reasonably well — Bao had been a larger man in his youth, and the clothes hung slightly loose on Chen Mu's frame. But loose was fine. Loose meant mobility.
Then, he knelt beside a smoldering fire and gathered mud and ash, mixing them in his cupped hands until he had a thick, dark paste.
The survivors watched in silence as Chen Mu methodically painted his face, neck, hands, and upper body with the mixture. Not decoratively. Not symbolically.
Functionally: camouflage for moving through darkness. Dark colors to break up his silhouette, to make him harder to see against nighttime backgrounds.
War paint.
Or, perhaps, funeral preparation. Chen Mu wasn't entirely sure which.
When he was finished, he stood and retrieved the two bandit sabers he'd dropped earlier. He would sharpen them now. And they'd serve until he could acquire something better.
He turned back to the survivors one final time. In the fading evening light, covered in mud and ash, and wearing dark clothes, carrying rust-stained weapons, he looked like something from a ghost story. A spirit of vengeance given physical form. Something that had stepped out of the realm of the dead to exact payment from the living.
"Put out the fires," he said, his voice carrying across the square despite being barely above conversational volume. "Tend to the wounded. Bury the dead with whatever ceremony you can manage. I'll be back in five days — or not at all."
"And if you don't come back?" Chief Tian asked quietly.
Chen Mu met his gaze, and the old chief physically flinched from whatever he saw there.
"Then know that I've killed as many of them as I could before dying," Chen Mu said. "And maybe, just maybe, that will be enough to make them think twice about attacking another village. Maybe the cost will seem too high. Maybe they'll decide this territory isn't worth the trouble and move on."
It was a thin hope. Almost certainly a false one. But it was the only comfort he could offer.
"But... I will come back," he added, and this time his voice carried something that might have been conviction or might have been delusion. "With Xiao Hua and the others."
He didn't wait for more protests or questions or goodbyes. There was nothing left to say. No words that would make this situation better or easier or less terrible.
Chen Mu turned toward the northern mountains, toward where the old Azure Cloud Sect compounds awaited like bones scattered across the landscape. The sun had nearly finished its descent, painting the smoke-filled sky in shades of blood and fire. Darkness was coming. Soon it would be full night, and in the darkness...
In the darkness, the Sword That Cuts Without A Blade was going to war.
...
And Heavens have mercy on anyone who stood in his way.
Comments
Ornery Walrus
I can’t access most chapters of MA, they show as locked. Please help?
Sovieticozasz
Damn.... Old Bao :(
