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MA 10.1: Smoke
🕑 Added 2025-11-17 13:00:18 +0000 UTCChen Mu closed the distance between them faster than either bandit could fully process. Not with superhuman speed, exactly — nothing that would look like flying or teleportation or the impossible velocities that actual cultivators achieved. Just the absolute peak of what a very, very skilled human body could theoretically accomplish if every muscle fiber had been optimized, if every movement had been refined through tens of thousands of repetitions, if reaction times had been compressed to their minimum possible value.
To the bandits, it looked like he simply appeared in front of them, as if several chi of distance had been edited out of reality.
Chen Mu's hand — empty, weaponless — closed on Xi's sword wrist before the blade could complete its defensive arc. His fingers found the precise pressure points where nerves clustered, and he squeezed.
Xi's eyes went wide with shock and sudden pain. His fingers spasmed, involuntarily releasing their grip, and the sword clattered to the ground with a sound that seemed too loud in the sudden tension.
Lao was faster, already reacting, already adapting. Both sabers came in with practiced coordination: a double slash that looked impressive and would be devastating against normal opponents. The blades whistled through the air with lethal intent, one high and one low, designed to force the target to choose which to block -- and be struck by the other.
But Chen Mu simply wasn't there anymore.
He'd already released Xi's wrist. Already positioned himself at Lao's flank where the sabers' arcs couldn't reach. The kind of positioning that required reading an opponent's commitment before they'd even fully committed, seeing the attack in the tension of muscles and the shifting of weight and reacting accordingly.
His elbow drove into Lao's ribs with precisely calibrated force — not enough to kill, not even enough to break bone, but enough to crack ribs and drive the air from his lungs in an explosive whuff of pain. The bandit stumbled, wheezing, his follow-up attack dying before it could even form.
Xi, recovering from his shock with admirable speed, abandoned the fallen sword and went in for a grapple instead —lunging forward with arms outstretched, trying to use his Muscle Tempering enhanced strength to wrestle Chen Mu to the ground. It was a smart tactical choice. Grappling negated reach and speed advantages, turned fights into contests of raw strength and endurance, areas where Xue Qi specialists excelled.
It should have worked.
Xi had the mass advantage — probably outweighed Chen Mu by twenty jin or more of pure muscle. He also had the physical enhancement of Stage Four Muscle Tempering, which made him genuinely, measurably stronger and faster than normal humans.
But Chen Mu had something else: skill so refined it looked like clairvoyance.
He could read the attack in a hundred tiny indicators that Xi didn't even know he was broadcasting. The slight widening of his pupils as he committed. The tension in his shoulders as he prepared to lunge. The minute adjustment of his feet to generate explosive forward motion. The tightening of his core muscles to provide stability for the grapple.
Chen Mu saw through all of it easily, processed it in the fraction of a second before Xi actually moved, and responded with a counter so perfectly timed it looked choreographed.
He dropped low — not all the way to the ground, but into a deep stance that put him beneath Xi's center of gravity. His leg swept out with the precise force and angle required to destabilize, catching the bandit's lead foot just as his weight committed forward.
Physics and leverage did the rest.
Xi crashed face-first into the ground with enough force to drive the breath from his lungs and scatter pine needles in a dramatic spray. His nose made a wet crunching sound — broken, probably — and blood began to flow immediately.
This wasn't a fight. It was a demonstration of the vast gulf between passing competence and mastery.
Lao, recovering enough to breathe again, came in with renewed determination. This time he was more cautious, both sabers held in a defensive pattern while he worked to create distance. It was good tactical thinking, showing actual combat intelligence. Don't overcommit against an opponent who's faster than you. Maintain defensive integrity. Look for openings rather than forcing them.
Chen Mu wove through his attacks like water flowing around stones — simply never where the blades struck. Every slash met empty air. Every thrust found nothing but space. And with each missed attack, Lao's frustration mounted, his breathing becoming more labored despite his enhanced conditioning, his movements growing progressively wider and more desperate.
"What the fuck are you?!" he gasped, sweat now pouring down his face despite the cool autumn air.
Chen Mu didn't answer. Couldn't afford to waste breath or concentration on conversation.
Because, to him, this was actually harder than it looked — significantly harder, in fact. His body wasn't tired in any conventional sense. His muscles felt fresh, his breathing remained steady, his mind stayed clear and sharp. But managing two physically superior opponents simultaneously, even ones far inferior in skill, required constant, intense attention.
The moment he focused too heavily on one, the other might exploit the opening. And so, he had to track both of them continuously — their positioning, their balance, their micro-expressions that telegraphed intent. He had to predict their movements while simultaneously executing his own. Had to maintain perfect spatial awareness in three dimensions while his own position constantly changed.
It was like playing chess (wait, what in the nine hells was chess?) against two opponents simultaneously while also being one of the pieces. Mentally exhausting in ways that had nothing to do with physical stamina.
And if either of them landed a solid hit, if one of those sabers or that sword found flesh, he'd bleed. His body was, after all, still only a mortal one.
Xi had recovered his sword now and was circling, his face a mask of blood from his broken nose but his eyes sharp and calculating. He caught Lao's attention with a sharp whistle — and gave some prearranged hand signal.
The two bandits immediately adjusted their positioning with practiced coordination, their movements becoming noticeably more synchronized. Lao took the aggressive forward position — the sabers flashing in complex, overlapping patterns designed to occupy attention and create openings. Xi moved to flank and cut off escape routes, his sword held in a mid-guard position, ready to capitalize on any exposed lines.
They must have trained together extensively, Chen Mu realized with growing concern.
He had to admit, it was competent teamwork. Against a normal opponent — even a skilled one — it would have been extremely effective. The kind of coordination that won battles and survived encounters with stronger individual fighters.
But Chen Mu, while he was many things, was never normal.
And his skills operated on a level that made their coordination look clumsy by comparison.
He could see the openings in their formation like gaps in a poorly woven cloth. Could predict their movements based on subtle cues they didn't even realize they were giving. And his body moved with a fluidity that made their coordinated attacks seem like child’s play in comparison.
Lao's sabers came in high and low simultaneously — a pincer attack that should have been impossible to evade without taking damage from one blade while avoiding the other. Chen Mu twisted his torso at an angle that seemed… anatomically improbable, letting both blades pass within a hair's breadth of his body without making contact. Then, while still in that twisted position, his hand shot out and grabbed Lao's extended wrist, using the man's own momentum to pull him off-balance.
Xi saw the opening — and struck with his sword in a thrust that should have impaled Chen Mu through the side.
Should have impaled him.
The angle was perfect, the timing precise, the execution technically flawless.
But Chen Mu had already anticipated it, had known it was coming from the way Xi's weight had shifted, and was already releasing Lao and pivoting. The sword thrust passed through the space where Chen Mu's body had been a heartbeat before, close enough that he felt the wind of its passage.
And then Chen Mu's foot came up in a snap kick that caught Xi squarely in the solar plexus. The impact lifted the larger man completely off his feet and sent him stumbling backward, gasping, his diaphragm spasming from the precise strike to the nerve cluster.
Still not a killing blow.
Still holding back.
Because some part of Chen Mu — some remnant of whatever morality or ethics had been programmed into him before his amnesia — resisted the idea of killing them. They were bandits, yes. Threats, certainly.
But they were also just men, weren’t they? Dangerous, violent men, certainly — but human nonetheless.
Lao recovered his balance and stared at Chen Mu with something approaching fear now — the kind of dawning realization that came from recognizing you'd picked a fight with someone who was far more dangerous than anticipated.
"This… isn't possible!" he complained. "You're not even circulating Qi! There’s no spiritual pressure. You're just... you're just a mortal!"
"Does it matter?" Chen Mu asked quietly, and realized his own breathing was slightly elevated now — not from physical exertion, but more from the sheer mental strain of constant tactical processing. "Are you going to leave now? Go back to whatever hole you crawled out of and never return?"
The two bandits exchanged another glance — that wordless communication again —and Chen Mu saw the decision forming before they spoke it. Saw it in the hardening of their expressions, the subtle tensing of their bodies, the way their stances shifted from defensive to desperate.
They weren't going to run.
Couldn't run, probably — he suspected that going back to their boss empty-handed, after being humiliated by a single "mortal" no less, would be its own kind of death sentence. The loss of face would be too great. Better to risk dying here than face whatever consequences awaited them for failure.
"Fuck this," Xi spat blood — his broken nose still streaming blood — and his face twisted into a rictus of determination. "Lao — we need to use that technique. Full burn! We end this now or we don't go back at all."
Both bandits pulled back simultaneously, creating a good deal of distance with sharp, coordinated backpedaling. Their faces were flushed with exertion and anger and what might have been fear, and Chen Mu saw them exchange one final glance — some unspoken agreement passing between them.
Then, simultaneously, they began to glow.
It started as a subtle thing, barely visible in the afternoon sunlight. A reddish-brown luminescence that seemed to emanate from beneath their skin, like coals buried in ash beginning to heat. But it intensified rapidly, becoming more pronounced, until both men were visibly radiating that sinister, sanguine light.
Their veins stood out in sharp relief against their skin: black lines of pressurized blood vessels becoming prominent as their Blood Qi surged through enhanced circulatory systems. Their muscles swelled slightly — but noticeably — as Xue Qi flooded their tissues, temporarily transforming already-enhanced physiology into something even more superhuman.
The temperature around them rose perceptibly. Chen Mu could feel it from several chi away — the heat generated by their bodies burning refined vitality to achieve a temporary boost.
This was full-body Blood Qi manifestation — the signature technique of many Body Tempering Martial Artists. By burning their carefully refined Xue Qi, practitioners could achieve capabilities that exceeded their baseline strength by several times. It was dangerous to use. Each activation consumed months of accumulated energy, shortened their lifespans incrementally, put tremendous strain on their bodies. Nor would they be able to hold the technique for long.
But in exchange, for perhaps five to ten minutes depending on their reserves, they would be strong and fast. Genuinely, dramatically stronger and faster than they had been before.
"Dodge this, you slippery fuck!" Lao roared, his voice carrying more volume than should have been possible from human lungs, and charged.
He was fast now. Impressively fast. His sabers became a whirlwind of steel — each strike carrying enough force to cleave through small trees, moving with speed that created visible afterimages. The ground beneath his feet cracked with each step, his enhanced mass and velocity generating impact force that exceeded his actual weight.
Xi came in from the opposite angle, his sword glowing faintly with concentrated Blood Qi that made the air shimmer around the blade. His technique was more refined than Lao's — less flashy, more controlled.
Chen Mu felt the shift immediately, the dramatic escalation in threat level. Before, they'd been dangerous but manageable. Now they'd become serious threats. A solid strike from a Blood Qi-enhanced blade would be a death sentence.
And if he couldn't get back to warn the village...
The thought crystallized into cold certainty: this ended now.
No more holding back. No more measuring responses. No more restraint.
These men had burned Six Brothers and Five Pine villages. Had participated in murder and destruction. Were likely planning to do the same to his home. And they'd just revealed they were willing to burn their own life force to kill him. If they wanted their lives to end that badly…
Then he would help them along.
Chen Mu's mind reached for the world inside himself — the understanding he'd touched before, when the Boar King had been seconds from crushing him. That moment of crystalline clarity when he'd realized that the essence of the sword was not an external tool but a mere extension of will.
He'd been practicing, these past six weeks. Not extensively — the mental strain made frequent use dangerous. But he'd experimented in private moments, when he was alone in the forest far from observing eyes. Trying to understand what he'd done. Trying to repeat it. Trying to refine it from desperate improvisation into something approaching conscious technique.
And he'd succeeded.
The concept formed in his mind now with far more clarity than it had six weeks ago. Not from the panicked desperation of survival, but with the cold precision of deliberate execution.
Sever.
Sharp and perfect and utterly certain.
The fundamental understanding that division was not an action but a state — a quality that could be imposed upon reality through sufficient will.
Matter could be separated.
Even space itself could be divided.
The distinction between "together" and "apart" was an illusory one — just a convention, and conventions could be overwritten.
His right hand came up: fingers extended, palm facing forward. To the bandits, it probably looked like some kind of bizarre defensive gesture. Like he was trying to ward them off with an empty hand, as if that would somehow stop Blood Qi-enhanced steel.
They didn't understand. Couldn't understand. Their worldview didn't include the possibility of what Chen Mu was about to do.
And now, it never would.
Chen Mu's Sword Intent did not manifest as visible energy. There was no dramatic light show. No spiritual pressure that mortals could feel. Not even a sound.
Reality simply… yielded to his will.
The space between his hand and the charging bandits suddenly became... sharp. Divided. A line of conceptual severing that intersected with both men at neck height — a simple, horizontal cut.
And then, their heads slid from their shoulders.
The separation was so clean that for a single, impossible moment, nothing seemed to happen. The bodies kept charging forward, momentum carrying them on trajectories their brains could no longer adjust. The heads hung in the air, apparently suspended, still wearing their previous expressions.
Then gravity reasserted itself. Blood fountained from the stumps of their necks in arterial spray that painted the forest floor in wide arcs. The heads spun in the air and tumbled to the ground, landing with soft thuds in the carpet of pine needles. The bodies actually took three more running steps — some residual Qi or neural activity still driving the legs — before they, too, collapsed in graceless heaps.
But the severing hadn't stopped with flesh and bone.
Behind where the bandits had been standing, directly in line with Chen Mu's extended hand, two massive spirit pines groaned with sudden, ominous creaking. Each tree was easily ten chi across, their trunks ancient and gnarled, their wood harder than most mortal metals. They'd been standing for possibly centuries, surviving storms and lightning and the slow erosion of time.
The severing line had passed through them both as if they weren't even there.
For a moment, they seemed fine — still standing, still solid. Then, the upper portions began to slide, moving with glacial slowness at first, then accelerating as the cut sections separated completely from their stumps. They toppled with thunderous crashes that shook the ground, their massive crowns smashing through smaller trees and undergrowth, sending up clouds of dust and debris and startled birds.
Chen Mu stood there, his hand still extended, and felt warmth on his upper lip.
He touched his face and his fingers came away red.
Blood.
His nose was bleeding — a steady trickle that painted his lips crimson and dripped from his chin. This was the price of using something as profound as Sword Intent without a proper foundation, without cultivation base to support it, without the infrastructure that genuine practitioners built over years of training...
His vision swam slightly.
Not dramatically — he wasn't about to faint or collapse. But there was a definite sense of wrongness now, as if he'd overtaxed something fundamental. It felt a little like he'd lifted a weight his body could technically handle but probably shouldn't have attempted.
Chen Mu staggered slightly, catching himself against a tree, and took several deep breaths. The nosebleed was already slowing, but the exhaustion remained. Not physical exhaustion. His muscles felt fine, ready to keep fighting if needed. But mental depletion.
He couldn't do that too many more times. At least, not safely. He needed to remember that. Needed to be more careful.
But first, he needed to get to the village!
Chen Mu looked at the scene around him — the two headless corpses cooling in spreading pools of blood, the fallen trees, the deer carcass lying where he'd carefully set it down. At least sixty jin of good meat that the village needed, that he'd worked hours to obtain.
He made a decision that hurt more than he expected. The deer had to stay. He needed to warn the village as soon as possible, needed to be able to fight if necessary. Because if these two were just scouts, if they were part of a larger force...
The implications made his chest tighten with fear.
Instead of the deer, he grabbed the bandits' weapons. Lao's paired sabers — rust-stained, poorly maintained, their edges dulled from lack of care and their balance atrocious from uneven wear. He hefted them, one in each hand, and grimaced at their quality.
But… steel was steel. And crude steel was infinitely better than empty hands.
He strapped Xi’s sword to his belt as well for good measure.
And then, he ran.
Full speed, pushing himself to limits that should have been impossible, that effectively were impossible for any un-enhanced human.
Trees blurred past, their trunks becoming vertical streaks in his peripheral vision. The trail became a ribbon of packed earth beneath his feet, and he could barely register individual features — just shapes and colors and the general direction of "home." His breathing remained steady despite the pace — not labored, not gasping, just deeper and more rhythmic. His heart rate elevated but stayed controlled, his cardiovascular system handling the demand with ease that would have amazed any physician back on Earth. (Wait, Earth?)
His legs didn't burn. Didn't accumulate lactic acid. Didn't show any sign of the fatigue that should have been overwhelming at this speed. They just worked, pistons driving him forward with mechanical efficiency, eating up distance with each stride.
And as he ran, as the forest flew past and the sun continued its descent toward the western peaks, he began to smell it.
Smoke.
Comments
Trevayne
Good update. I expect his cultivation has been sealed somehow so it can't be used. However, that shouldn't have affected his Diamond Body.
Konstantin Parkhomenko
I improved a little bit. I think.
Sovieticozasz
So far the narration and style seems better than volume one, cant wait for him to remember!
