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Progress Update [18 October 2024]
🕑 Added 2024-10-18 08:00:12 +0000 UTC
Hello, I hope you're doing well!
Small announcement: instead of the poll about the short stories for next month, there will be another post a little later today where I'll discuss content for Patreon, talk about short and side stories, and share some of my thoughts.
Chapter 3 Pt. 1 Rework Progress.
Adding content to K's scene is complete, and I'll be finalizing the expansion of Morgan's scene next week, as I want to immediately start Morgan's POV afterward [it will be released on dashingdon before I decide whether to include it in the main story].
In addition, I've refined some scenes from previous chapters, specifically:
Prologue.
I's scene [Chapter 2].
Morgan's scene [Chapter 2].
I also fixed numerous errors I stumbled upon while reviewing the earlier chapters.
Small Update on Height Difference Variables
I've decided to expand the height difference variables by adding more specific values. Although it's more work, this approach feels right because it gives me more flexibility to refer to height differences more accurately if I want to.
L's Side Story.
I'll do my best to finish the plot part this weekend, but I want to thoroughly check for grammatical errors before moving on to the more intense scenes.
Thank you so much for your continued support! I hope you'll have a relaxing weekend and an even better week ahead! ♥
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Comments
Jenna
Oh no, please don't apologize! Feedback can help me improve in certain areas. I enjoy it when readers share their favorites, especially I, because it seems like most of the people who favors I like to keep their thoughts to themselves (just like Isaac/Iris does 🤭).
bumbo_wenus
OH NO IM SO SORRY 😭😭😭 it was great, just I is my absolute favourite so I’m glad to see them in different light or with more content
Jenna
Your comment makes me think it was really bad 😅 But I feel that some of the narrative moments I’ve rewritten should now better convey Isaac/Iris's personality and align more closely with how I want to present them, so I’m glad to see more excitement about them!
bumbo_wenus
I’s scene refined we all cheered !!!!
