Whizumi
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Progress Update [12 April 2024]
🕑 Added 2024-04-12 07:00:08 +0000 UTC
Hi! I hope you're doing well!
I'm so happy to actually write this: the polishing of the entire Chapter 2 Pt. 2 was finally completed this week and ready for release!
The update contains 43k words (excl. code) and will be released on 14.04.24.
That's a lot more than I had planned, considering I even had to cut some parts that will be included in the next chapter. But I'm glad I was able to stay on schedule.
Also, this week, I've been adding extra changes to the narrative related to the MC's appearance:
This is just a small part of what I wanted to do. I plan to add more details to the narrative about scars and facial hair in the future.
I also fixed a lot of coding and grammatical errors in Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 Pt. 1, but I feel like I'll have to go back more than once to correct things.
About the errors (grammatical, coding, etc.):
Errors, especially grammatical ones, are what I struggle with the most.
I apologize for that, and I'm very embarrassed about every one of them and my inattentiveness.
If you notice any errors (and I'm sure you will), I have created an anonymous Google Form where you'll be able to leave your error report.
I will be very grateful to you for helping me make the demo better.
The link to the form will be attached at the very beginning of the updated demo.
There are two days left until the release, and I will use them to reread the text to make sure there are no errors I might have missed.
Thank you for your support and interest! I hope you are looking forward to the update! ♥
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