Maya CYOA 1.1.5
🕑 Added 2023-07-20 21:00:14 +0000 UTCA Single Round of 5.56 (1.1.5).html
1.1.5 - Corrections and adjustments
-Fixed a missing description of the creature of silence in the True Ending
-Corrected an erroneous instance of "hear" to "her" in the True Ending (thank you, @somedumbmemer!)
-Updated several passages with extra backstory, particularly in reference to Maya's life outside the walls
-Corrected several erroneous instances of past-tense perspective
-Other minor adjustments and fixes
Depending on how many more spelling mistakes I find, I might make another version before 1.2 (which will include the first few pictures and a new path to take in the forest).
Comments
Lanc3r
Nah I'm just stupid, I didn't scroll down!
I tested with and without Gayle, and with respect bottomed out, and had a restart button both times. It's possible that there's a specific set of variables which breaks the sequence though, so I'll keep an eye out.
There should be more text below the fadeout if you scroll down. If not, I'll run some tests and see what I can find.
Lanc3r
When you get Maya executed (from her being respectless and then doing nothing when prompted) doesn't that count as a end? I'm curious since there is no button to restart the story after it.