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Chapter 65

🕑 Added 2024-10-13 19:22:20 +0000 UTC

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Wasted Ink

You’re fine, don’t worry! Though I honestly thought Amy wasn’t even that much of a bitch here? She could’ve went off on Vicky for any number of reasons, but right now she is quite literally just wanting to get to Carol and give her a peace of her mind before that wall around her heart cracks and she loses the gumption. Yeah it’s a bit cold to ignore her like she’d done, but saying that apathy to Vicky in order to get to the heart of the matter quicker is ‘turning into Carol’ seems a bit like an overreaction. “Any normal person, even with Vicky’s need to be liked, would NOT want to reconnect with someone who treats them like Amy is doing.” - Amy said thank you, didn’t want to be touched (boundaries), and told her to keep her apology before walking into the house. She treated her a bit coldly, but there was no huge disrespect or any insults whatsoever. Just distance. If that makes someone not wanna reconnect with a traumatized sister they know is prickly at the best of times already, then that’s their problem, not Amy’s. And I may have phrased it wrong in the story, but Amy doesn’t plan to use or rely on Vicky to ‘handle’ Carol. She’s not afraid of Carol at all. She just knows the other women in the house won’t let the woman crash out on her, and she knows that for a fact. Having someone like Avalon as your boyfriend sorta makes that a given for anyone with any kind of common sense. Regardless of anything, she’s not hung up on keeping ties to the Dallons. She’s cold and numb at the moment and just want to excise herself from the family. If her and Vicky talk later when things aren’t as tense, and decide to stay friends, that’s all them. But Amy isn’t going into this with any mind to manipulate Victoria. As said before, she’s just apathetic and numb to her right now. It’s also important to remember Vicky, quite literally, set Amy off into a panic attack due to her emotions being out of control the last time Amy saw her. That’ll create some distance too. Amy isn’t perfect, and neither is Vicky. I’m happy you’re enjoying the story!

Edar

Eh, kind of ambivalent about that tbh. I hold no special love for Glory Girl or the other Dallons, but the whole, " I'm gonna treat you like shit now and be a bitch to you, while using you to get the result I want, but don't worry I will do a 360 and make nice later" is a bit shit. Any normal person, even with Vicky's need to be liked, would NOT want to reconnect with someone who treats them like Amy is doing. It's Amy deciding to turn into Carol, without the turnaround later. Trauma or not, that is something only shitty people do and is hypocritical, especially to someone who grew up as her sister and biggest supporter. She could have made her point to Vicky that she needs to be focussed on the meeting, but they could talk later. But no, she decides to try o be like Avalon and bulldoze through everyone and everything to get what she wants, and everyone else can suck it. Then again, power, the perception of power, or powerful backing does that I guess. It is what it is, I like this story because I like the Character of Avalon and his takes no shit attitude, but something about Amy's actions just rubs me the wrong way. Not bashing I promise, still one of my top stories and author, just expressing my feelings at the moment. Thank you for the new chapter.

Michael Friede

Im so happy about this chapter. I’ll post a longer review once it goes public but I want you to know it was absolutely worth the wait, and you described Amy so well. Gothcore all the way, both aesthetically and emotionally. Amy now KNOWS how hot and amazing she is, and I am here for it.

Wasted Ink

I agree wholeheartedly. However, it took Amy a lot of willpower and heart to make the decision to go there, and at a certain point of trauma your emotions eventually start to numb towards the people involved with said trauma - in this case, the Dallon family. Amy doesn’t hate Vicky, but she still has trauma connected to her and to handle everything coming up, she HAS to keep that wall up. It’s the only way she’ll get through it in one mental piece. Eventually she’ll reconnect with Vicky, but right now she has a one track mind.

Tersin

Transformation is awesome, and its good to see Amy feeling confident enough to face down her family on her own. I'm feeling a little bit bad for Vicky though, she doesn't really deserve the could shoulder that Amy's giving her. I get why Amy might be a little bit leery around her once she knew about the aura problem, but nobody knew that was an issue and Vicky has done nothing but be Amy's biggest supporter and want the best for her whatever that looks like. Especially since Amy is counting on her to keep Carol from doing anything stupid. Vicky deserves at least an explanation.

Michael Friede

GOTH AMY TRANSFOMATION completed!!

fireball77

Thanks for the chapter!

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

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