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Chapter 63

🕑 Added 2024-09-20 20:13:30 +0000 UTC

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Tersin

Thus implying that there’s actually a THIRD girl involved in all of this, and making everything worse. Yeah, that would also totally be in character. In that case what’s gonna cause the high volume corrections is Brian’s attempts to exert his ‘authority’ and command Aisha to leave with him and have no further contact with Avalon or Invictus.

Risser

Welcome back I really enjoyed this. Sorry I haven't been able to do more proofreading... life got rough. Hope you'll be willing to accept the work later when things clear up.

fireball77

Thanks for the chapter! I'll give it another read when I wake up so I can better gather my thoughts but I liked it a lot

Wasted Ink

lol something like that. Or she’s tickled silly by it and says that Sherrel would kick her ass if she got him sent to prison for statutory rape charges.

Tersin

I'm just gonna assume that Aisha will be embarrassed for 2.3 seconds and then correct Brian's assumptions at high volume when she figures out what's going on.

Wasted Ink

I agree, but you’ve gotta remember: Jason is, as far as Brian knows, an 18 year old bad boy with chiseled muscles, an arrogant demeanor, and at least two other teenagers he’s boning and has a relationship with. And apparently, without Brian knowing, Aisha has gone and been recruited by this teenage heartthrob who is COMPLETELY and UTTERLY her type. A 14 year old teenage girl who he KNOWS has been preyed on by older men ever since she hit puberty. Combine that with her making a joke about fucking Jason, thinking she was only talking to him and Cassie, and of course an older brother completely out of the loop would draw horrible conclusions. I think most people would. Him hitting Jason (and getting his fist broken by a Stoneflesh spell) was the result of his anger, confusion, and desperation overflowing in a moment of rage. Right now he thinks Avalon is grooming his sister, or seduced her into joining. And going off of how much of a playboy Jason is (dating multiple girls, showing his body easily, cocky), that’s a fair assumption. I’m happy you enjoyed the chapter and don’t think it’s too OOC though! Dw, Brian won’t be like this indefinitely. He’s actually a fairly reasonable guy.

Tersin

So... Brian's pissed at Avalon... for something his sister said, which is entirely in character for her. And given her trollish nature may or may not have been said just to fuck with people... And his solution to this emotional turmoil is to fight Avalon to the death to protect his sisters 'honor'. He's very lucky that Avalon will probably find his attempts adorably amusing and not kill him for Aisha's sake. This is the sort of stupid over protective 'I know best 'cause I'm older' idiot ball thinking that I'm used to seeing from Danny over Taylor. Kind of weird to see somebody else with that idiot ball. Though I should make it clear that just because I think the behavior is dumb doesn't mean I think it was out of character or poorly done in the slightest. Always amusing to see Tattletale's Tattletaleness backfire on her.

Michael Friede

Aisha you literal gremlin. Almost feels bad for Brian, almost.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Ignoring the ominous authors note amazing chapter as always thanks for ya hardwork !


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