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🕑 Added 2024-05-23 13:51:29 +0000 UTC

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Stanley Seymour

Thank you for the chapter, deeply appreciated!

Wasted Ink

I can go in and edit what feels lost. There were a few things mulled over, but that's mainly because I thought I did a decent job explaining in-chapter how it happened. I'm trying not to write out and describe EVERY move everyone makes all the time because that feels like it saps momentum, so the process of Cass and Amy leaving Fugly Bob's, Amy going back home, etc was glossed over. If you could mention what specifically feels confusing then I could try to fix it.

Ocean Breeze

This chapter was really confusing, mostly because it feels like we skipped one. A lot of the stuff you explained in the A/N should have been made clear in the actual chapter, or at least in an A/N in the beginning.


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