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Chapter 39

🕑 Added 2024-04-20 23:50:14 +0000 UTC

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Wasted Ink

We’ve literally spent like five to ten chapters fighting the Empire, going through different POVs, fighting the ABB, developing relationships - this is one of the few chapters where he explores his magic because it’s relevant and he just rolled a big one. You want me to ignore the magic exploration and just go punch more people?

Alex I

As much as I enjoyed the chapter, you are falling into the pacing habit Celestial fics start to fall into. Please stop spending as much time nerdgasming over subtle power bullshit or weebing out over looks. We get it, he's as vain as Glorygirl, we don't need to hear him jerking himself off about his looks while shits going down. Also maybe dial back the constant puppy love between the two, it's cute but overdose is a thing.

Big ToFu

now he just needs a badass trench coat


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