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Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2024-03-07 06:50:07 +0000 UTC

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Wasted Ink

The entire plan from the second he captured Hookwolf in the mall was to use the inevitable Empire breakout attack as an opportunity to take out the vast majority of their capes in one big fight that shows his strength to the PRT and the world. He could do the mystical subtle mastermind thing, but he straight up told Cass that he plans to kill the Empire and make himself seem so powerful that he can hold Downtown and ward away any potential gang vacuum through sheer presence and power. Doing things subtly won’t give the over the top effect he’s going for, and Jason is characteristically a ‘punch wizard’ anyways - he enhances himself and goes for destructive spells most of the time, otherwise the fight with Hookwolf would’ve been done in one or two Master spells. And assuming he won’t profit from this afterwards is a bit wild of a statement to make when the whole chapter was from the POV of other people. Kaiser, the twins, Othala, Purity, Night and Fog - they’re all still alive, the empire safehouses are still there, and nothing can stop Avalon from draining Max dry after toppling his empire in front of him. The PRT are not mindless apes who scream ‘murder’ and attack the clearly dangerous and trained group of capes who are killing nazis and who, quite literally, saved them from what was clearly a lost battle. For one, the PR backlash would be fucking insane. For two, Cauldron definitely wouldn’t want that. Avalon is showing versatility the likes of which even Eidolon doesn’t possess, and his powers are NOT stopping. Overall, I think you’re both underestimating Avalon’s value and expecting something different from what he practically laid out in-story already. This is a war against the Empire, starting from the ‘culling’ of most their capes during Hookwolf’s transport. Avalon plans to TAKE downtown and make it too hot of a place for villains to fuck with since he, the one who almost single-handedly took out the Empire, is occupying it.

Itisn1tmyname

So I returned to this chapter to see if my comment got any reactions just to see that apparently my internet connection obliterated it before it ever arrived here... To paraphrase: I found this chapter disappointing. Avalon is a wizard with prep time *and* information on enemy movements, I kinda expected wide scale AoEs with esoteric effects - whether it be simple sleep or "inability to speak till they acknowledge the faults in their rethoric, inability to feel joy until they repented etc.." (though I'm not familiar enough with the winds to say if that was possible in the first place. Furthermore, I kinda expected the killer truck to do a drive by of every single stash house in the meantime, but oh well. Missed opportunities. What peeves me is that they massively endangered the already responding heroes for and antagonized the PRT for no good reason beyond immediate gratification when it would have been just as possible to enchant the Nazis with sleep or immobility till Birdcage, with a hidden sudden death effect that only triggers at a later time. Y’know, not splattering meatbags in front of the self-righteous. I'm all for killing the Nazis. Just... don't invite massive troubles to your doorstep by doing so? And maybe set up events so you profitate, in the end. Be smart about it instead of ... uncoordinatedly storming right into the raid like Mad Max barbarians...

Bishop7053

Moaaaar, I need more for my addiction. Also can't wait for purity to get some behavior correction via dick


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