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Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2024-02-15 23:34:23 +0000 UTC

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Wasted Ink

That's a good catch - I had been under the impression that Purity was akin to a glowing, Silver Surfer-esque form when using her powers. I'll edit that portion.

Bob Saget

This bit doesn't really make sense, far as I can tell: "Faces flashed through her mind. Beautiful, flawless faces. Sabah’s. Glory Girl’s. Laserdream’s. Purity’s. Sherrel’s." She shouldn't(?) know what Purity looks like, considering, 'As Purity, Kayden didn’t wear a mask, as it wasn’t necessary. With her powers active, her hair and eyes became a radiant white, emanating a light so brilliant it was impossible to look straight at her' But if she does know what she looks like, it doesn't make sense for her to fixate on Purity as 'beautiful and flawless', because, 'Kayden had brown hair and eyes. She was mousy and shorter than average. She was visibly older than Fenja and Menja.'

Bishop7053

Welp how we know what is in store for purity, especially with how she was mentioned in chapter. He is gonna literally fuck the nazi outta her. That's hot AF honestly


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