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TRAS Chapter 76: Look, Don’t Touch

🕑 Added 2025-03-02 15:00:21 +0000 UTC

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Ace Green

As far as Ailn's behavior I suppose it just has to get chalked up to splayed attention haha. I do agree it pushes more at believability than usual though!

Ace Green

In particular climate details and the sort can be tough to figure out

Ace Green

The point is well taken! As well as the climate one

Storyflower

I thoroughly enjoy the story, it has a nice combination of fantasy and detective elements that glue together in a natural way, so don't feel it like an attack on its premise when I sometimes critique parts of it as illogical while the story in itself and almost all of its details are rational and logical. For me it is very strange that our detective hasn't concluded yet that he can hear something others can't, especially since his thoughts clearly went there.


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