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Tomorrow's update and sneak peek
🕑 Added 2024-12-26 15:23:28 +0000 UTCLike I said some days ago, in this update, I will add more scenes to the time period where Petmes goes into his trance, so immediately before the showdown with Narmer. I'm still working on those scenes, but I am also adding a few more scenes after the argument, to show you the reactions.
Here is a sneak peek from that part, from one of the choices you can pick as your MC's reaction (if you choose to stay quiet):
The silence stretches on. You don't break it. No one else does it either.
Qenna eventually takes another step closer to the king and leans down to get into his line of sight, peering into his face.
"Hey, kidโฆ You good? What happened?"
Narmer still doesn't answer, but you can see his fists clenching, his fingers digging into that open wound on his hand. Blood starts slowly dripping onto the ground, and Qenna takes a careful glance at it.
"You're bleeding, mate. Will you let Petmes treat you?"
"I'm fine," Narmer finally groans out in a voice that sounds exactly like he, in fact, is not fine at all.
Petmes stuffs another, giant bite of fish into his mouth, then dusts his hands off and walks up to Narmer. He gently takes his hand, and the king lets him.
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Hope you'll like it, and the update will come around the usual time, Friday night ^^
Comments
HarleyQueen
Scary Narmer... ๐ฌ
