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"Best fic-writer" 8-9 (NSFW Comics)
🕑 Added 2021-10-14 10:49:22 +0000 UTCHello, kittens :3
I finished two more pages last night
And this is what I came to :) I haven't drawn hentai comics before, it's a new genre for me and I've made a lot of mistakes that have become obvious to me
I wanted to make the painting simpler and easier so that the pages would come out as often as possible. But every time I get caught up in the details, and working on each frame of the comic is a little... dragged out
It's a problem I'm going to tackle first.
The second problem is the script and storyboarding of the comic. I originally chose a format that I wasn't very comfortable with. Right now I'm leaning toward drawing a manhwa rather than just a webcomic (what do you think of that?)
I'd like the sex in my pages to look roof-top. But for now, it's just... sex, which I don't think is enough.
And that's what I want to do about it. I'm going to interrupt the "best fic writer" plot for a while, and draw another strip, with a finished joke, to work off everything I've learned from drawing these pages
And afterwards, I'll draw the second part of this comic :)
I'm writing this because I really care about your opinions on the comic. If you have any thoughts on what could be done better and what is superfluous, I would love to hear it
I must say that I usually don't listen to critics, because I've been drawing all my life and, as they say in my country - "s'ela na etom sobaku", I've learnt a lot about drawing and I know exactly what to do and how to do it. However, hentai comics is something new to me. It's a field for experimentation.
And since, first of all, I'm going to draw adult comics just for my patreon patrons, I need to know your opinion :)
Maybe with your feedback I'll understand what I'm doing "right" and what I shouldn't do :)
With love and gratitude for your support, Tiana Lynx
