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Chapter - 156
🕑 Added 2025-06-15 17:35:45 +0000 UTC[Title : Delivering [Harry Potter]]
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Regal is currently in the writing room of his house.
Yes, real writing.
Ink. Paper. Silence.
Not his usual click, click, typing on a laptop.
For reasons he couldn’t quite put into words, not yet, he had decided not to type this time. It wasn’t about being nostalgic, or making some grand statement. It was just... instinct.
He sat at the long wooden desk near the back of his private study, pen in hand, hunched over a fresh stack of paper - not the usual printer sheets that smelled of toner and bureaucracy.
These were thicker.
Off-white.
A little toothy on the fingers.
The choice was intentional.
It began with a feeling.
Just a feeling.
…and the paper he chose isn't typical A4 paper, but a textured cotton-stock, bound without metal clips, double-sided with margin lines - and a fresh black pen.
He told Rock to order the paper for him in the morning and now it was already on his table, after he mentioned how ‘soulless’ some printed screenplays felt.
Now it felt like an answer.
The paper had a quiet grain to it, a subtle weave pattern.
Not enough to distract - just enough to feel. Like old library sheets and something meant to last.
It took ink beautifully.
With no smearing or excessive bleeding.
It wasn’t just an aesthetics choice either.
There were advantages to this paper - small, technical ones most people wouldn’t notice unless they worked in the business.
For one, it was nearly impossible to photocopy cleanly.
The texture caused shadows and glints under scanner light.
Counterfeiters couldn’t duplicate it easily, and it handled water or sweat better than cheap bond paper.
You could annotate it with a pen, pencil, or marker without the ink sliding or warping.
And it made flipping through pages quieter, smoother - actors could read without making noise in a rehearsal hall, or damaging the edges just from nervous thumbing.
But none of those were why Regal chose it.
He chose it because it felt like the story deserved it.
For days, he wrote like that.
Pen and paper.
Pen glided on it just slow enough to force him to think, and just smooth enough not to interrupt him.
…and as he explained.
He wasn’t changing anything in the story or even the structure.
But between every line of dialogue, every stage direction, every scene heading - he wrote.
He wrote in between the story.
Minute cues.
The way Hermione’s hand would twitch slightly after Ron snapped at her in the library. The subtle lift in Harry’s shoulders when Hagrid casually calls him ‘mate’ for the first time.
The background murmur of four hundred students going dead silent as Harry steps into the Great Hall, only for a single spoon to clatter somewhere far off.
Snape’s unbroken eight-second stare after Harry mentions the scar.
The sound of snow crunching beneath Hagrid’s boots in the courtyard, alone, past midnight.
The way Harry reached for the doorknob to the Mirror of Erised room - like he was afraid it might vanish before he touched it.
Page after page.
Tiny layers.
What was once a clean, well-structured 134-page screenplay ballooned.
By the time he finished, the script sat at 218 pages.
He wasn’t concerned about the length. He knew most of these notations weren’t meant for the audience. Not directly.
They were meant for the people who would bring it to life.
The actors. The crew. The editor. The composer.
They needed to feel what he felt. Not just understand the words on the page, but walk into the world fully dressed in its weight.
Regal flipped through the final draft, each page now alive with invisible strings - emotions, atmospheres, eye-lines, breaths.
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Two Days Later – Script Delivery.
The special editions of the screenplay were personally prepared, printed and overseen by Regal.
Regal had already informed Red Studio of his decision to issue a non-digital, watermarked distribution, opting for courier delivery rather than emails or secure PDFs.
Naturally, this didn’t sit well with the studio executives. With filming just two weeks out, the board had expected efficiency, not eccentricity.
Despite having full creative control on paper, Regal still had to show up in person at the boardroom.
He made his case.
Not defensively, but with the calm certainty of someone who knew his choices would be misunderstood - until they weren’t.
The board listened. Grumbled. Raised eyebrows. Some scoffed behind their silence.
But with X - the studio CEO and one of Regal’s few genuine allies - sitting quietly at the head of the table, fingers steepled, not interrupting a word... it was tolerated. For now.
Regal understood what was happening beneath the surface. The quiet resistance. The spark in their eyes that hinted at a desire to see him stumble.
Maybe not publicly. Maybe not cruelly.
But enough to whisper, he is too young to be right all the time.
And yes - he cared.
Of course, he cared.
But not enough to stop.
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Beyond the studio logistics, Regal took the time to personally contact each major cast member.
He explained the updated protocol himself - firm but respectful. This time, the script wouldn’t be shared through the usual channels.
No digital files would be sent, and hard copies distributed in bulk at the studio.
Instead, each actor would receive their own individual package.
Within forty-eight hours, those packages began arriving at doorsteps - each one hand-delivered by courier. Regal had overseen every detail, from the binding to the final review of the content.
The script arrived enclosed in a navy-blue linen folder, its surface smooth and weighty, bound with soft thread along the spine. There were no logos or studio stamps - nothing commercial or mass-produced about it.
Just a single line of text pressed elegantly into the cover:
[HARRY POTTER – LOCKED DRAFT – DIRECTOR'S VERSION]
Inside, the pages felt just as deliberate.
On the surface, they appeared like any other screenplay, but there was one subtle difference.
A faint watermark was embedded into each page - not of the film title, but of the actor’s name.
It wasn’t decorative.
It was a safeguard.
The watermark ensured that if a page were ever lost or leaked, it could be traced without question to its source.
The implication was clear: what they were holding was more than just a script. It was a personal responsibility.
Regal wasn’t trying to intimidate.
He was preserving something.
The story, the tone, the intent - each page was treated like a living thing, not a disposable handout.
And by the time the actors turned to the first scene, they could already feel the difference.
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Location - Alfred Molina(Snape).
He received his copy in the evening, after a long day of voice rehearsal.
He opened it with mild curiosity… and curiosity took over as soon as his fingers touched the cover.
There was something almost warm about it.
He couldn’t explain why, but he flipped the first page with caution, like it might be alive.
Twenty pages in, he closed the script briefly and let out a long breath.
This script is definitely more detailed.
The subtle notes - Snape’s breath caught but he did not react - struck him more deeply than entire monologues.
When he reached the scene where Snape stands over Harry sleeping in the hospital wing, saying nothing… but staying a moment longer than necessary…
He whispered. “Bloody hell.”
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Next – The Main Trio
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Daniel Radcliffe - cast as Harry - read his copy sprawled across the hardwood floor of his cramped apartment. Around him were empty chocolate wrappers, bookmarked copies of Chamber of Secrets, and three rejected wands from his earlier prop sessions.
He wasn’t a clean reader. He skipped around. Flipped back. Re-read moments just to feel them again.
Halfway through, he froze at a particular margin note about Harry's silence after seeing the Mirror of Erised.
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Across town, Rupert Grint, living in the Grint household, received his copy in a stiff manila wrap tied with twine. His mother had placed it neatly on the kitchen table, atop his unopened cereal box.
At first, Rupert skimmed lazily.
It was his usual routine - read for tone, skip the bits he thought he already knew. But something kept pulling him back.
The Christmas scene between Ron and Harry.
He read it once.
Twice.
By 2 a.m., he was still reading.
Eyes wide.
Breath shallow.
“Damn...” Under his breath.
“Sorry, Mum!!” He blurted, trying to cover it with a cough.
SMACK!
But it was already late… as his mother's inevitable smack made it in time - who was just a foot away perfectly playing the role of guardian.
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Finally – Lily and Richard
Their copy arrived mid-afternoon. Lily was in her room drawing when her grandfather knocked gently and handed it to her.
“Your copy.” He said simply.
She squealed. “Mine?!”
“Well.” He said, settling beside her on the carpet. “Technically mine, too. But you get first dibs.”
As she was going through it thoroughly she reached a line where Hermione was dismissed by her classmates for ‘knowing too much’, Lily stopped reading for a beat longer than the pause required.
She glanced at the margin note Regal had left in the script:
‘She's not showing off. She's terrified of being invisible again’.
While reading this she ran her hands over the textured folder. Her fingers stopped.
“Feels different.” She said.
Richard watched her, his expression unreadable.
He opened the cover for her and scanned the first few lines.
Then further.
Page by page.
With each turn, the faint frown on his brow softened.
He didn’t speak.
But inside, he was surprised.
Deeply.
Because in all his years in the industry, he had learned that changing something late always smells of desperation.
But this… wasn’t that.
And even Lily, as young as she was, sensed it too.
She looked up. “This isn’t like other scripts.”
“No.” He said, almost to himself. “It isn’t.”
He touched the paper again.
Not just with his fingers - but like someone testing a heartbeat.
He knew now:
This wasn’t a rewrite.
It was the real version finally coming to the surface.
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[To be continued…]
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Comments
David Morehouse
You know how to write buildup, holy cow. Just for the buildup of the movie I feel like you should get a "Slowburn" tag on the story 😂
